My favorite part of this song is the lead vocal. There is an arresting quality in the voice that has real star power. The song, however, loses a lot of its power due to the heavily repeated lyrics. I wanted the vocals to really break out with more passion, and i think it's an element of the song that kept the vocals from really taking off. Still,there is alot of talent here--keep building on this talent.

This is a Beautiful piece of work should make a video for this one

Good vocals flowing with the music, falls a little into gothic but still listening too much pop about the song for me.

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Hey Jenn, Good song for you. Good rocking tune. I thought that the cadence of the lyrics got a away from you here and there but overall a great tune. I would have liked some kind of instrumental with guitar or keyboard riffs spicing it up. Another great song from you. Cheers!

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Nice voices, good harmony. Nice music.. Problem is that at times the volume drops and then rises. Suggest that you introduce the opening bars at 00:00 to 00:12 as an intersperse between the vocal segments. Lead voice is very good. A bit dull at 01:24 with the backing good at 01:28.. Sounds good. I definitely like the segment at 02.07 to 02.17 which makes this song have some oomph in it :) Good luck!

Try putting back up singer to give the song an extra flavor. The vocal was strong and clear you need help I don't know where you been in life but I do know you singing with your feeling. I found out from my mistakes a song like this you must be ready to sing it hold hearted. God bless, St. Louis, Mo.

Its always hard for chicks to breakout in rock. The lyrics are ok, but phrasing needs a little work. If I had to produce this track, I would have you add some drum fills between your phrases give and chourus. this will give the music to breath a little and will help cativate the listener instead of it appearing as rambling. And I would revamp the last 45 seconds of the song. Also I would casy a lead guitar player that would put some rips throughout and then a closing conclusion part with vocals.

Really hobby sounding stuff..not well written, performed, or tracked; just the sounds of someone screwing around, with no profound musicality; or even pretty good musicality.

verse phrasing is too wordy overall mix level is too low some nice vocal harmony ideas dynamics of band are bit subdued should of had an ass ripping solo at 2:05 too much singing all the time shows lack of confidence in the band

Nice track and the flow bring in a sound fragnance like no other keep it up with good music Peace Deurox

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