Off the top i like the real soothing general sound of the recording and specially the sweet vocals....really nice! the song is quite nice and has a real good vibe to it with all the right ingredients. i really enjoyed it and frankly have nothing bad to say about it, it's simply awesome and i admit that as a signer myself, the really beautiful vocals won me from the start. hope hearing more soon and maybe work on something with her someday....wow what a voice! great work!

Always try and grab the listeners attention in the first few seconds as that may well be all they will listen to your song. having said that i like the tune, great vocals very strong and believable . The guitar riffs get a bit boring. More work on the riffs and try and add a little colour to the guitar sounds.Love the backing vocals. All in all i think its a good effort so keep up the good work.

I really liked this song, It has everything a rock songs needs, and I say Rock because I wouldnt call it an indie rock song so i feel its in the wrong genre there. But yeah it has Good tight back line with dynamics that I like to hear and hard rocking guitars with nice melodic lead. The vocalist has a nice tone to her voice and she really suits the mood. In saying that.. My only downfall with this track was I found it hard to hear what she was singing at times, I think she put too much emphasis (Or not enough) on her vocals that I lost at times the lyrics she was singing and lets be honest here, its the lyrics people usually want to hear and sing too. So I would say Jocelyn you have a lovely voice, but don't kill the lyrics by over powering it. Nice track though good luck with it.