Song Reviews
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United States, Arizona, Chandler
review
I appreciate your timing. You have flow. You can write. You can rhyme. YOu can tell a story. I appreciate the honesty. Please beef up the drum track. I want to be with you- infuse it with more punch and that would help.
United States, California, San Francisco
From the depths of my mind
I appreciate that you guys are using music to tell your story, and I think you should continue to do so. Your song however sounds very cheaply made and poorly produced. The beat is flat and has no energy. It is too simple and not rhythmically interesting. It keeps repeating itself and its just not awesome enough. The lyrics are great and meaningful, but the voices need to be touched up so that they sound cleaner and dont leave the key. You could use more rhythmic variety in your flows. Great use of vocabulary and ideas in the song, just needs better production.
United States, New York, New York
Not My Thing
I will not knock a fellow Artist. I don't know if you have the feel for hip/hop. Some of this track is really good. But you lost me in the first verse. Second verse (whoever is flowing) was better. The music is just kinda there. Nothing explosive. Keep writing!
United States, Texas, New Braunfels
Jon Hartless
Sorry but it was bland and samey. I didn't hear anything different or striking enough for me to switch off from the track. The backing music was bland and predictable.
United Kingdom, Nottingham
Jon Hartless - From the Depths of my mind
Its not terrible. I can tell ya'll really put alot of thought in your writing. Your style and your delivery needs work. Alot of work so... Put in dat work and master your craft or leave it alone. Please.
Review
What can I say man..I've reviewed a bunch of your tracks, and this is the same, silly, goofy, unsophisticated meandering of someone trying to be hip hop and failing to do anything serious or creative with it.
United States, Michigan, Detroit
FROM THE DEPTHS OF MY MIND review
Not my music style, I dont know about rap or hiphop, but it sounds well done.
Mexico, Tampico
From the depth of my mind
easy listening beat that has been recording well with real tight vocals. you guys have the potential to go places although i dont really listen to this sort of music, i could sit down and actually listen to it and just chill out good work keep it up
Australia, Perth