It got that Cali swag and if you don't understand that you're not fit to review.. Ta ha! I had to say that first.. But the only problem I really hear is your dubs are too loud so it sounds like two of you are rappin at the same time.. The beat is not amazing but I felt where you was coming from as far as what you was sayin.. Practice makes perfect though so keep womking and listening hard..

I like music in your song but your rhyming technique requires a lot of work. You should make freestyles as often as it is possible it will help you to find many other ways to put rhymes on beats. You should sound much more sure on a beat and much more agressive - it is hip hop my friend. Work hard. One Love

The beat is nice. This is layed back and chill. Overall this is ok, Good Job and Good Luck. Note: Lets connect on social network. Facebook;https://www.facebook.com/luckee.luchiano?ref=tn_tnmn#!/pages/Luckee-Luchi/183962798334537 Twitter;@760_Luch

The beat was nice, but the delivery was bland. It needed a lot more spice to it. I didn't really hear the feeling it sounded monotone like you were reading off paper

you remind me of Guccie nice flow tho. But its kinda slow and dry but i fell that u belong to brick squad and should try to place your music with them

lyric and story need to be more creative ! track groove is ok.

Are you serious with is??. Cheese ball track, and the most annoying voice and rhyming I've heard in a while. Just sounds like the noodling of some knucklehead.

you got a real cool vibe and sound your music not to much going on with the track makes it easy to enjoy makes you want to sit back smoke a blunt and groove to the vibe of the music keep up the hard/good work and i'll see you at the top... FOLLOW me on INSTAGRAM & TWITTER and like me on FACEBOOK http://www.facebook.com/pages/Mizzle-Bean-Records/177686148915005 http://instagram.com/pinhead_gotti https://twitter.com/pinhead_gotti OR on vine/iampinhead_gotti

I like to introduction i also agree please DROP THE LYRICS AND THE VOICE. The music sound track is good.

Nice introduction. Love the music. Drop the lyrics and voice, you have a good tune there. Work on the tune. Clean up the lyrics, no invective you may be able to get this on top because the backing music is very good. Explicit means you lose about 75% of the audience. The voices are good which is in the end a pity if this song is ditched because of explicit lyrics and unsuitability for the public. As a background theme this is perfect. Rated you on the music :)

I like your laid back flow, and the mellow beat ... the lyric is rather positive for the most part. I feel sure there is an audience for you, but I think your craft needs practice. Your flow is choppy, and awkward in spots. Practice will fix that. The beat after the first 8 bars bores me, but that just me. The most popular songs today have the same beat all through the song. I just need diversity ,,,, loops weary me Overall I say you got good stuff,,,but its not yet Hit material. To achieve that it has to be polished, flow tight, z beat keeping the listener into it, and a hook that sticks in peoples head. This song needs those things. I hope this helps,