Nice 1 good job

Nice how you guys did the back and forth way of flow I felt that the first guy could have been more on beat second guy really had got me into it good job and keep up the work.

Your material is dope, your execution needs a lot of work, maybe flowing differently would make this song much better. It's pretty obvious that you guys are still new to this, but keep doing more music and find your niche. let's see how you guys grow from all this constructive criticsm.

Mediocre. I kept waiting bro. It was the flo of a kid man. Not a man child. A child man. That can't be good dude.

It's cool bro, I'm glad your doing music just keep on going hard. I know you really want to get your lyrics out so that people can hear what you have to say and that's wassup bro. Just keep going hard, and never give up.

the flow was way off beat. the song did not entertain me or pull me in. and the instrumental....I'm sorry but you have to find another producer

Weak/annoying/childish delivery. Rehashed, boring track. Sub par hip hop.

I don't care for rap but I like this song because it's a clean song.the rhythem and beat was smooth,we need music like this for our children and grandchildren.May God BLESS you and your band. St. Louis,Mo.

The beat is clean and well balanced with the lyrics. I think the style of the music and the lyrics dont match very well. The music is soft and pretty, but the lyrics speak of lyrical warfare and you should sound bad ass. The vocals could use some rhythic work, the flow sounds a little off at some points. If the rhythms are in time and the vocals are clear then the lyrics are easily understood and have a greater impact. I like the chorus and the meaning of the lyrics. I would say the only thing that needs work is the vocal style and rhythms. Great work!

The beats cool just like your average oldskool rap beats like Cypris Hill i spose. But yer i dont really listen to this genre of music but then again if this hits that certain audience then who knows it coul grow on them ... good stuff anyway keep it up!!

Este estilo de musica no me hace gracia asi que si me lo pueden evitar, mejor, no se y ni debo opinar sobre ello, no seria justo.

This is just not my thing! Good effort but I think you can do better! The music needs a little work. Lyrical delivery could be smoother! Keep trucking amigo!

Its an OK sound, i cant say something is a game changer here. Its lyrics iv heard over n over... Structure to this Song would have worked... The rappers voices are OK but hey we listen to Lyrics, all the way to the Production of the Whole Sound... 5 out of 10...Also breath and calm on beats...#Not a bad JOB overall

Listening to your numbers I feel that you are a novice musician. You already have a pretty good sound, does not quite fit me your flow is often quite messy and too often I hear the lack of air and problems with completing the next verse. All of the compositions, however, is good.