Nice groove, cool to have acoustic guitar, otherwise heard it all before.

Decent song, but it needs a lot of work. The rhythm is off as if you werent counting or feeling the music. The pitches were off so it took away from the flow. Focus on the music and leave thug life to those who do that....Profanity for profanity sake is obscene, not effective and it distracts from your message. good song, though!!

Not my style of music, but it listen well done to me, can listen it got the feeling and it is flowing good.

Real Hip Hop love what u talking bout but work on flow

That was awesome! Keep it up! Check my music out at www.Facebook.com/NileRossMusic I opened up for Rick Ross back in February! Follow me on twitter too @NileRoss

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Great beat & lyrics, looking forward to hearing more from you!

Great topic and subject matter right here. You guys got flow I think that this is a music of truth that real stuff.

This is some very good work. I definitely appreciate the subject matter, and the way it was approached. I really like the chorus, maybe bring out the singing part over the words more. But I still enjoyed it. Flows were good also, I liked it. Just a some more twicks production, but overall it was a good listen.

This is some very good work. I definitely appreciate the subject matter, and the way it was approached. I really like the chorus, maybe bring out the singing part over the words more. But I still enjoyed it. Flows were good also, I liked it. Just a some more twicks production, but overall it was a good listen.

I'm not a rap artist, so I'll give you my best valuation. I can say that as far as what I hear, there is a lot of talent there. The production is overall as good as I've ever heard in this genre. Best of luck... Guy