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Cool track. I see you out there doing your thing out there in Bear Creek. Get your flow just a little bit tighter. The mix is Cool. Try to be a little more strategic with the writing content. Keep doing research on hip hop and rap. You have to listen to great to be great. Get more into a more world wide feel with your music. Think global not local. Put your city on the map but also keep it so others can relate. I enjoyed listening to the track. Maybe you can check me out for a critique as well. Good luck and never let anyone hold you back from pursuing your dreams. I'm from Los Angeles and we need to have y'all come out and hit the stage and network. Peace and God Bless

Yo i dig that slow flow style you got, it goes good with the beat that you chose. Sounds like you have been doing this for awhile now and I think you could only progress from here. Keep it upp!

I'm feeling the lyrical verbiage Bro. I really think the production needs to be clean and clearer with that this would be a banger for real. As is I can listen to this over and over. You get it mixed and mastered and it will put this track over the top.I like the beat and like I said yo lyrics are more than on point. very nice. not only are you spittin you are actually saying something.

I like the way you have the beat set, an the sound and quality riding , if you create your own beats holla at me , just an artist tryna make it but fr that song straight got a good vibe something make a person just Wana get up there an start freestyling lol

Flow is good.. Intro is too long.. shorten the intro and let it go straight to the hook.. once the song started it was good from there.. like I said .. nice flow .. Intro was just too long.. keep up the good work..

I played it back a couple times to grasp the message i was hopeing to hear a d ur style os unique the recording sounds far,and the mix is ok my overrall opinion of the spmg was ot was a good spong i hear difference i hear music and i hear where you all are from keep doing good music keep putting out great music and the result shpuld be a steady paced wim for you all it was ok thow around adults i had my son around and he had tp leave but great jpb

I would have to say it gave me a old fifty cents feel just would have liked a little more energy to push me to really grab me and make me want to listen although the lyrics shows more skills then what has been out lately

I like this its do dope Lots of medow 4. Fr. Sounds like you should be linking up with them boys over there @g-unit I be they will like your style This track remind me of my back in my days real talk. But keep up the good work. And i will be updated my music real soon so i hope to hear more from ya stay up 1 c.s.t.h.87 ys boy G

Nice gritty rhymes and the beat is a slapper. It should be more songs like this. I could see my self riding with the top down to this on a good nice summer day just cruising around the city streets.

Hard to not nod Ya head to this. Sounds like the artist is a proven vet and today is Veteran's Day. The track, verses and hooks all professional. Dig the movie script intro letting you know what's coming. Straight gansta feel almost remind me of Diplomats.

On the positive. It's a very dope track, I like the beat production on it and the lyrical content reminds me of a lot of old school under ground rap music that a lot of people have lost now. On the negative side, the only thing that I feel would need some work is the overall mix. Personal I like a track that has the vocals above the mix, that way the person listening can clearly make out what you're saying. otherwise it's a very dope track, I like the style and delivery.

I love it truthfully. I was into the song and felt it lol. Jumping at dogs barking and shii. Your flow goes with the beat which is impressive. I understood everything you was saying, and you didn’t go off topic. I give this song a 8

Nice flow and that beat is a banger!!! Where can I go to download and share all your music? What is your Twitter/Facebook/Instagram? Can I find you music on iTunes/Spotify/Pandora? Keep doing your thing!!

I like it. Sound pretty good. like your style. You have a nice rap voice. Just continue to push and keep on putting out. You sound good compared to all this bullshit ass music that's out here now. Keep pushing. Luv bossI like it. Sound pretty good. like your style. You have a nice rap voice. Just continue to push and keep on putting out. You sound good compared to all this bullshit ass music that's out here now. Keep pushing. Luv boss

The mix itself is kind of low and idk if u wanted the "aye" to have some effect but it kind of sounds off. The song itself is pretty cool but the mixing does need a tad bit of work. Soon enough all this hard work will off.

Your music is deffenentlly one of a kind and in its own lane. So having saying that keep up the excellent work . dont ever give up on your craft . feel to send me more of your catalog to reveiw. ,,DJLpeezy

The beat keeps you bobbing your head. It's a nice beat to roll with not just for the clubs. The hook is tight and it's easy to pick up on. The song reminds me of Ludacris when he first came on the scene.

this is some solid work love listening to real hip hop not that watered down thing they got going on right now everything in your song is on point to me hope you do a video for this song #dakrazyway

Music is suppose to do exactly what this did. I like it. Keep it up don't let your dreams die keep the growth and expansion expanding. Your talented and need more fans lets get them up for you