Some really interesting things going on in this track. The funky guitars of the into lead into a trill full chorus line with frantic guitars and smashing drums.

I would say you have captured the feel of 50's sci fi computer sounds with the intro. The bass line seems a little off in the rhythm but this could be on purpose. I wouldn't say the singer is a traditionally good one, but I can see how the style fits. The harmonies work well. Not bad.