this is a great example of what time on your hands can turn out like the emotion and desire in the entire creation and musical balance of it all is unique and diverse it is essentially what it takes to be a star and when i say this you should really consider recording quite a bit more songs it will happen and you will have enough time to create and complete many sucsessful compilations for many years to come if you make it you can erase it.

This is a nice song you got here and I understand where your coming from because there isn't alot of people who will pay the price to be a star but I bet some are willing to do that now tho but keep doing what you doing bro and check out my music if you have some time

First of all the beat is hot and the intro is very invitational. The hook is catchy and nice, and the lyrics are pretty good. Overall I see greatness in this song. It has potential to top the charts. Keep it up!

It's a different sound from some of your previous hits. That's always the goal. It comes easy because of the fact that I'm such a big fan of music. I love all kinds of music. That keeps me on my toes, always searching for a new sound, something that intrigues me. If it intrigues me, chances are it'll stand out on the radio. I never want to blend in with the mold – I want to create a trend, never join the trend. I want things to stick out like a sore thumb.

What's good? I listened to your track, and I think you got some Talent! Good lyrical content,flow is becoming,the track is nice too.Stay driven, Keep doing your thing... And I'll See you at the top!

I have to keep it G with you at all times...... I love the energy from start to finish but it was a little hard to understand exactly what you was saying I also fucked with the beat but ultimately the mix threw me off I recommend that you invest more into your craft it'll pay off in the long run I had to figure out that the extra money for professional mixing and mastering is worth it

Your style is one of your greatest assets. The track is appealing and assertive. It features a good collection of vocals layered with some cool RAP, showcasing all your skills one by one over a dope boogie of a beat. With an abstract delivery on the hook, the effortless cool of a musician being one with self. Were you not so cool about it, it might be obvious that you are attempting to up-end hip-hop. You are doing all the right things and creating some cool beats along with good lyrical content. Keep that up and somebody’s going to notice. We like to make a CD and listen to it in the car before posting, so we can tweak the sound a bit.

I dig this track & Concept by the artist- Its got a very smooth vibe; I think he has a unique style that take me back to "kenya" If I was him I would shop this track over there first- But track just need a bite of tweaking on the master -The mix is fine- Its clear- I really enjoyed the song- Nice One Homie!!

I can't smile but I like your sound. Something is missing. You need to take this song to a new level. It just needs tweaking here and there. Don't give up on this song and keep your sound, it's different

"Smile (wanna be a star)" tune by Kalipi i would say is Inspirational Truth in Hip Hop. the first verse of the tune speaks of wanting to be successful but not wanting to put the work into being successful. i believe that when someone works hard and sacrifices greatly to acheive one's goal(s) in life, he /she will appreciate & cherish it so much more. the second verse talks about keeping your eye on the prize and not letting anyone or anything discourage you. it's so important to keep ambitious & positive people around when one is on a positive journey. Kalipi nicely demonstrates the importance of hard work & staying focused on one's journey to greatness!

I like the concept of the song .The beat is pretty Liv.The hook is catchy you on topic through the whole song and thats very important.Wen i listen to songs i pay more attention to wat the artist is saying and your lyrics on point!It had potential

I like this song and I thinc it got a lot of potential! You did yo thang on tht and yo style is original! Keep doing what you doing and you gonna go places! Never stop doing what u love to do and you gonna get there

I would look at the production a little more . Maybe put it through a producer a studio? I like the lyrics it flows with the beat. Smile. Good title . Enter it to our gmail. We have a show on Tuesday night for Indie artist on our station must be mp3 and you have to have an active twitter account. Lipglossnmics G mail Go to my twitter Kellykelpromo the link is pinned top post that is our station. Its free. The audience is your judge when you are on you will be tweeted so let your following know.

I listened to this song about three times and I like the story in the lyrics about never giving up on your dreams and smiling through adversity, nice. It also had a nice beat the flowed well with the lyrics as well. Keep up the good work and smile to you come up...

Really liking your song it sound nice like your hook, your verse, the beat its like pretty nicei would play it for my woman sure she would love it too. Keep up the good work much love and peace

Love the concept dope hook also I share some of the same views as well keep up the good work If you just make your hook a little more high pitched though it would be perfect great evenIm not usually a fan of reggae but your song caught my attention

I enjoyed this. well recorded. the vocals are clear, understandable. the beat works for me, it grooves. This has a proper message, stays clean and still got some swag to it fo sho'! should be part of a film soundtrack. I hope you get to do a music video for it, has lots of potential. keep on keepin' on, its better than what I hear at the grammies. word up!

Sound quality to this song is very good. Smile is good vibe type of song. Shit you want to ride through the park with yo top down bangin! Man Kalipi you keep doing what you do! Promote this track! Stay blessed!

Nice work. Looking forward to making music with you in the near future. Keep up the good work. Team work makes the dream work. So if want to collaborate with me let me know. Im open for it. 100. B.Ez!

The song is great just stay focus on the positive things in life and u will be successful at what you doing.. take time to write put your feelings on the beat.. when you do that people will feel you more