Love the chorus and the message you had was real. The lyrics were mixed nice but the delivery could have more feeling. You sound a bit like 50 Cent. Overall, I'd say keep at it. The topic you had was real and we need more rappers like that.

This song is fire, I love the hook!!!! The lyrics were alright but your delivery and flow have room for improvement...Overall great song, keep pushing!!!!!

THIS JOINT IS DOPE HOMIE I DEFITNATELY LIKE IT'S ORIGINAL AND FRESH KEEP GRINDIN AND BEING YOURSELF AND LOVING WHAT YOU DO. Feelin the emotion also .

Yeah not a bad track , has a few quirky moments , i thought the vocal sat a little loud over the music but still ok maybe it where it was recorded , the chipmunk vocal was kinda cool has a nice tunes , good that every second word wasn't a curse word so that is good ,overall i kinda liked it , with a few mixing issue fixed the is a future for this artist !

Good song just fix the voice a little i dont know if its because you are in open space or what but if you fix that you would have a decent song but overall its not that bad. Remember quality sells now

no love decent sound and good word play it has a nice beat on production could be a little better your lyrics sound far from the mic you could turn them up a little bit but there is an echo simulating a booth with help you can even hang blankets to absorb the acoustics also you should think about adding some adlibs to the verses adlibs help you express the feeling Hoodiney