nice flow, clear vocals but need more adlibs on the hook.i like .

Nice beat and music through the song; except for the chorus which was a little rough vocally. Good story and message.

only thing needed is a vocalist on the hook!!!! good job!!! maybe a little more action in the drum track nice song keep grinding!! Gino

good rhythm would like to hear some more dramatic change up in the beat would like to hear some vocal back-up singing behind the rapping catchy chorus

Excellent story and well rapped. Very complimentry choice of beats. Mature message for the youngsters. Trying very hard to get behind the refrain. Very monotone andflat dynamics. Such a greta set of words for the refrain is lost on the rather flat delivery. Needs some work in that department.

Good tune. The mixing is really great. When I listen to this I feel like I'm listening to Jay-Z. Honestly I can't tell the difference between you two. Keep it up.

This type of beat requires a dope verse. Nice job.