That was awesome! Keep it up! Check my music out at www.Facebook.com/NileRossMusic I opened up for Rick Ross back in February! Follow me on twitter too @NileRoss

Not feeling the lyrics... like the music...

Interesting feel to the music, thought of Music to Frankenstein immediately. No offense, just a fact, the introduction especially, and then with witches and bitches etc.. And the wailing at the back, best try Music Clout and give them the song for a horror movie.

Work a bit hard on your sound dawg I know you'll get it right keep pushing

Some stupid ass stuff. Low intelligence, no sense of artistry, and annoying. From the low end of rap, and generic even by it's low standards.

Great intro production, very professional sounding. The beat is filthy, just the sound quality is a little low. The rapping is great, it has great flow, interesting rhythms and vocalics. The only problem is that the words are meaningless, and there is nothing for a listener to connect to. You gotta reach out and connect to listeners, but these stories are just generic like every other main stream rapper. Are you doing this for the music, or the money? Either way, make it look like you care about something. Whoever does your beats is a master producer, so keep him around.

Music is generic off rip. I think ya'll can spit. I just think ya'll ain't had nothing to say. And dat does happen, just don't beat us inda head with it. Nothing that was said moved me, that's not good. You gotta have a decent chorus at least. If its all freestyle and it was supposed to have no chorus, ALL your lyrics gotta be alot better than that. I think you already know. Tighten up.

I can't do it. you have potential, but it sounds too commercial. The flow is pretty good, but could use a little work in some parts. I am all about content when I listen to songs and I couldn't feel what you were talking about

Mix is very good very well sounded and good voice and message what you doing is spitting