This makes me feel good riding in my car on a hot summer day while the top dropped playing it real loud nice flow to it nice beat lyrics sound fire on this track i will be playing this one for real

I love the song so much. Only thing that I would suggest is that you put some more passion into the track. The lyrics are beautiful, the melody is tight. It brings back memories of the days when music was music Just my humble opion, push those vocals and bring out the passion some more and you will definitely have a hit. Marvin it up and you got it for sure. Nice Nice Nice. Well done.

Shits fire my boi (Yeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee)

It's Easy To Here, The Motown Fealing In This Track because it's smoking. This Is A Detort Sounding Song. The Mix Is Good, But More Time Spent on this track, could make It Near, FUNK Brothers. I Would Love to Hear This, With 100---150 hrs more Invested Into The Mix... I'm Not complaining, Just speaking as an Investor..Time & The Right Money Spent Could Bring BIG Dividends..Don't serve the Pie, before it's fully cooked..Very Nice.

I like the concept of tbis song. I will like to hear mor music from you in the future.i love the old school feel of the song and i would play it in my playlist and would love to know more about you as a artist.

Nice I think this song is really nice. The whole song is well put together. The audio and production quality sounds awesome. You really did your thing on this track. I can definitely see your career going very far if you can continue to make this type of music. I love the fact that you show passion in your song and that speaks in volumes to the listeners. Keep up the hard work! You definitely have what it takes to go to the top. Good luck.

Larry first thank you for this awesome creation of your and the lyrics and sound is sensational and has a Motown feel with it. You have an amazing voice and it's got what it takes, got some awesome pipes. I enjoyed it and yes I would spend my last dollar on this song rather than buying a fish sandwich (a Barry Gordy test of songs).

Oh... I love music like this because it reminds me of the lovely group called the enchantments. I think I spelled it right. There was so much love in the air back in the 70's more so than today. Love the rhythm and vocals so dynamic. Thank you for your gift to the world at large.

I really enjoyed this song, lyrics are exceptional the melody and vocals are also on point. It definitely has that old school, motown flavor which is a positive thing, love the outro and the end with the ad libs, all around good vibe song, need more music like this!

I think you should really make some samples out of your voice i think you sound timeless reminds me of thr older generation which myself think is the best music and the best time it was all about love

Nice flow.. definitely moves in that Motown sound. Keep putting out those soulful tunes. I will always enjoy listening to your projects.. music is the universal connector it keeps us all in tune..

Listening to this song I first thought you were simply joking. But listening to the music and background i believe this is an honest effort. OK, lead vocalist off key, keyboards,off. That being said, this could be a nice song. If you took a little time on an opening verse. Slowly raised the passion, and kept the notes within the vocalist range. Thanks Magic

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Opportunities befall us all It’s up to us to break the fall Every little thing isn't set in stone Yet we cringe and cling to things of old A little step and a giant leap To things we think may never leak I awake within the nighttime hour And realize all of my own power This is true and well I think But how long before again I sink Inspired now truly and amazed Yet will it turn all into a world dazed My art is back on track it seems To successes filling up the beams I wander restless through the night And have stopped completely all this fright Amaze me will you with what I have done And everything that I have won Yet still more is to be achieved Again success I will receive I am the one walking on this path And fear not for there is no longer wrath That's what i get from Don't know why!!!!!! Continue your work you're great at this.......DAWAN

Feel this songs bring back meaningful songs...Songs that tell a story of reality. We need to bring music back to feeling ,loving.and pain and happiness. Good luck to the artist At some points in the song he jump from one thing to another in the storytelling of this song. Idea to the artist is to focus on the story whether he is talking about pain or love ...stick to the basic topic of the song. I dont know why must be about the basics in the lyrics. love your idea style and blues style, it makes what your sing stick the ear of the person. He or she feels and wait to see where you are going or try to imagine what your next story line will be next as they enjoy

What a good soul music, ma kind of music and I don't a spend a day without listening to this flow. I really admire the passion you have for music brother. Keep it this genre and the sky is the limit. Thanks

Very nice RnB that Sound of Music Style is much like 70 s and 80 s try this song again with the today sounds give it a Try you got a great singing Voice but to reach all ordinance young and Old you need to adapt to days Sound in RNB

Like the retro C@@L Vibe :-) This is an anachronistic reach back into the real Motown days. Nice arrangement. My positive critique as a singer/songwriter producer is to be alway s build your tracks so that you always have somewhere to go both dynamically and level of interest to keep the track that constantly draws a listener in to listen to more and be entertained. 2nd , please pay close attention to pitch. Pitch is everything and at times when one over sings, the pitch suffers. Really, it's more of a phrasing and breath thing. No matter, keep on keeping on. Thanks for sharing your music :-)