I like this one, but by no means does it mean that it's hot. Actually it isn't. Honestly it lacks quite a few of the basic things that make up a hot or hit song. I won't go into that, but i will say great effort guys. The artist could use a bit of" as i say usually producer influence, the mix is far from close, and the arrangement once again is nearly missing. Nice try guys, but much more work to be done, record another one, and keep recording. It only get better, if you make it that way.

Sorry bud this song sucks try using mix craft to make your beats you really don't have a message with your words Good luck just try harder Imani Simone

look,, if you want to do anything great in this industry you really need to invest more into your craft... honestly.. this sux.. the beat sounds like you made it on a $20 keyboard you got when you were 7.. the recording was even worse... get real quality beats.. and either upgrade or pay for quality studio time.. this track will go nowhere as is.. Ive been there before.. then I got serious... GET SERIOUS or you will waste alot of time. RaRah Kameen.

Bring in an awesome female melody to counter the rap. It could also use a guitar (real one)and some other real instruments to add to the electronic ones.

I understand that Artists write and sing what they live but why such an abundance of their private grievances.I think the easy access to home studio and the internet is wreaking havoc on the quality of music today. Every and anyone can record a song even the poorest of quality and have it on the air at the click of a mouse. The access does create much need opportunity where there was none before but to what cost?. There is potential but far from developed. Lil Crime I am sure your intention is to "drop" a hit that will make it onto the charts and my advise for you is to study the charting songs and see how your production stock up .

AInt nothing wrong with taking it back a little. Sounds good. Keep working on your arranging.

I love the intro melody and the rest of the song has a good flow. Lyrics are good. Keep up the good work.

talent is there, but keep polishing. There is no limit for perfection. Recommend more attention to mixing. it is very important stage in production.

I think you need to start all over again with this production. It needs more work before you put it out there for listening.

IT HAS A OLD SCHOOL FEEL TO IT, 6UT IT NEEDS 6ETTER PRODUCTION ND DELIVERY

good work fam

production is not good...lyrics and hook is not good at all...good message but needs alot of work