Not discounting your fan base or supporters, but dude step it up! You should not sing on a guitar riff melody if the chorus is boring and repetitive. "If you know better, Do better" this was a sub par attempt at an anthem song or chant driven hook!

i can hear the drama in this one real cool sounds on this one love the production on it vocals and concept is cool just mix it down a little better and that's it.

I was digging this one. good production.

Its not something that I really feel but you should mix your vocals a lil better and work on your delivery...this could be a good song if you take your time with it...

That's a good beat. You got a good flow & all but you should have molded your flow around the beat to make it smooth and blend together.

I Like The Instrumental ,the ay the kick bumps and arranged nicely. i know the vocals needs a bit re-mixing maybe add more compression or reduce the delay in it. your voice already has a major and dope presence on the song, don't need to overdue it. Hope that helps. Peace BLU PHILLY

good song just mix the vocals better

good song just mix the vocals better

When I heard this Lil' Bootsie jumped in my head. The straight forward delivery and approach. The toms are hittin' brings nice seasoning to the song. I dubbed this "young man Blues". He's reflecting on his everyday struggles. I know many will be able to relate.Love the special effect sounds to support the lyrics.Add a Video and market your song might be able to make some noise.Nice sound.

catchy hook, but I feel like you can go a bit harder, I like the use of the added effects and ad libs you have, even appreciate the metaphors and punchlines. Keep it going you can only get better.

mos def sounds like underground rap to me!!

i like the track creative and lyrics are on point keep up the good work

like this...music is sensational.. you could actually, not be bored with it...it gets you up!!!...tremendous stuff!!!!.. something to smoke a blunt to

Have confidence that if you have done a little thing well, you can do a bigger thing well, too

SOunds like a Sunday afternoon stoned jam to me. HUlk City

FROM ONE RAP ARTIST TO ANOTHER...I AM DIGGIN THA BEAT, DAWG! LYRICALLY, UR SAYIN SOMETHIN...BUT THA FLOW ON THA VERSES NEED TO BE SLOWN DOWN JUST A LITTLE. AT TIMES U FELL OFF BEAT FOR A SECOND, BUT CAUGHT IT AGAIN. TO ME, THA TRANSITION FROM THA HOOK TO VERSE NEEDS TO BE A LIL MORE SUBTLE...A LIL MORE ON THA SAME TRACK. U SHOULD TRY FLOWING INTO UR VERSES LIKE UR FLOWING ON THA HOOK. I CUT FOR THA HOOK THO! I SEE WHERE UR GOING. GOOD WORK..KEEP IT UP, PIMPIN'... -NB

I don't understand it! Sorry.

This song don't like me, don't feeling the armony and the power in the singer voice, instrumental it very very loose

I didn't quite like the intro i think it took away from the song I think you should consider a r&b singer on the hook don't get me wrong it wasn't bad at all the vocals just need a little work but over all I like the song

just not feeling it too much, i mean im not saying your not good cause the lyrics are alright but i just dont like the style to be honest. #Salute though.