Very different kinda sound. Elements of old school fun Pop music. Appears to be another catchy pop tune and then the harmonica kicks in... that adds a great needed interesting spot to the song. Good work, fun song. Sincerely Edward Westbrook

Excellent idea to start out right away with the vocals. Very strong lyrics and a fastastic chorus verse. Amazing musicial arrangement and the spoken part in the conclusion was dramatic as well as it was something many of us have asked ourselves. Brilliant piece.

A happy go lucky kind of John Sebastian folk pop song, The guitar sounds good, the drums too, and the vocals were suitable but the ad lib vocal acrobatics lost me. Sounds like a good time was had making the recording and that's a big part of getting your song across. The production of a song takes a lot of time and effort from the initial writing and plotting of melody to the fleshing out of the initial basic instrumental parts. Whether you record by yourself or have to organize band members the process is time consuming so for most of us it is a passion or we wouldn't do it. I enjoyed your efforts, thank you.

This is a well done, pop song. The arrangement and playing fits to the style and message. You're looking for suggestions; the song needs a musical intro. To make song "radio friendly" you need to follow the format of what currently works in songs not j just being played on the radio, but what people are used to, and expecting to hear. In my honest opinion, this is an easy fix for you even though the song is recorded. Slide everything over on your DAW, then use some of the existing instrument tracks for the intro. Also, I would delete the spoken word outro, it adds no value to the song. Overall though a great job on a fun song. Don't take these suggestions as criticism, they are just my recommendations.

This is a really cool song you can listen to it while you are driving throw it on at a party just love it the verses and the choruses are very strong Steve from voodoo dancer wish you all the best

A cute pop song that has a very strong retro feel. I liked almost all of it but there is one area that I would probably suggest redoing. The verses were showing a good sense of humor with a glimpse into your life. The melody of the verses were good but the area that started to chase me off was the high falsetto at the end of your choruses. The high notes are fine to use but the 'a...a...aa... came off too much like you didn't know where to go with it. Other than that area, it's a nice pop song. Keep writing and good luck with the future!