Really cool guitar riff opens the tune and is quickly built upon with a driving beat and counter melodic bass. Poor Charley is caught in a world that he is not sure of. The pace picks up frantically and his words are like daggers being thrown at all who have wronged him and led him astray. A powerful chorus follows and the piano joins in the cacophony, I'm thinking you were reading the Perks of Being a WallFlower. Well crafted tune overall and an excellent outro very reminiscent of Faith No More and a resounding similar Epic message!

Buenos días desde Jerez de la Frontera compañeros, estoy escuchando vuestra canción y aunque no es mi estilo he de reconocer que tiene algo que gusta, aunque para mi gusto, la voz del principio debería afinarse mejor... los contrsstes son estupendos y muy expresivos. Esa guitarra del principio también engancha, y el desarrollo del tema no está mal, no cansa ni se hace monótono. Poco más puedo decir acerca de esta canción, así que sólo me queda felicitaros por vuestro trabajo y desearos toda la suerte del mundo en vuestro proyecto, un saludo desde Andalucía!!!

The song has alot of interesting parts. Doesn't all fit with me. Voices are okay. Music better. All and all could be a very good song except for the fact that all the lyrics don't flow. With just a little more work. I believe you can win with this one. Thanks Magic

One of the things I like about Number One Music is hearing the dynamic range of artists and music I'd never be exposed to otherwise. So there's good and interesting with each song we get to hear. In this example, the vocals sound nearly a little echo-y almost like the singer is performing in a bathroom. Style wise it's fine, but quality and production leave the singer sounded unconnected. Love the guitar.

Nice sound!! I like the beat and i think that you can go further ;) Thats what i can tell u about what I think on this music.. once u come to europe say something.. hope u can reach the goal.. Best of luck!!

Hello Melete....I always believed I was pretty well read, but couldn't figure out the book? The song is really good, the piano during the intro and through the first part of the song is a little too much as it's an ambient sound that really doesn't need to be there until the end piece. Your guitar and bass (along with your vocals), create a great sound alone-so as I said, the piano was not needed until the end of the song, though if you choose to use it, play it more prominently as the rythem part of the song. I do know that everyone loses sound quality from the web, I'd like to hear the actual .au file. Good song though, Great work!!!! Respectfully Dave/CHRONIC PAIN

Nice synth intro. Midi is king in here. Voice sounds like Bare Naked Ladies singer. Cool instrumental parts of the song makes it a rocker to enjoy. Hard to decipher the words in the chorus and I was really hoping to guess the book. I'm almost there - "we are infinite" is the clue? Maybe the Bible? Or Catcher in the Rye? Moby Dick? Can't tell. I do like the piano in the verses and having the piano fade out the tune is cool. Also nice high note at the end reminiscent of Meatloaf. Too bad I can't guess the book...

great start, great turn of guitar chords and powerful bass. then the piece takes another direction, a little unexpected but the surprise in music is a field that attracts me as well as the unexpected. is the discovery of new ways of making music that makes the artist unique is the desire to go beyond that has always fascinated me. work a little on the volumes of the various instruments including the voice pre make the piece one thing. compliments

Needs more bass... Perhaps needs a female singer in the background to give some color to it Apart of that..love the story line and feeling Thank you for sharing this work of art Let us know when we can see you live

Sounds like some computer generated music here. Tune isn’t bad. Sounds like drum machine. The vocals aren’t bad. A little less reverb? May help. The song isn’t bad but definitely not radio quality. I wish you the best in future song writing and I will stop back and listen to your music again. Take care and keep on playing. I’m giving you a little better than average grade because I think I see what you ate trying to accomplish. It’s probably more like a 2 star song but I gave you 4.

Fine smooth rock tune, reminds me a bit of Placebo due to the voice and singing. I like the melodies, which are very melancholic. The piano seems a bit displaced in this production and the only natural instrument seems to be the voice, maybe the guitar, too. But anyhow I like the end with the piano. The production reveals some lacks due to the recording: too much gain that an unwanted distortion produces. But after all a cool track which echoes in my brain...

I LIKE THE SOUNDS USED IN THE VERSES INTERESTING EFFECT THERE IS GOOD FEEL AND EMOTION HERE IN THE VOCALS AND THE OVERALL PRODUCTION SITS WELL WITH THE SONG ITS A GOOD LENGTH FOR A SINGLE AND SOUNDS VERY MINORISH THOUGH THE SONG WOULD BENEFIT FROM ANOTHER CHORDAL CHANGE SOMEWHERE ALSO I FEEL THAT THE VOCALS IN THE CHORUS OR THE KEY OF THE SONG NEEDS TO SHIFT DOWN A COUPLE OF SEMI TONES SO ACCESS NOTES ARE EASIER WITHOUT THE REACHING