I couldn't really understand what you were saying. Needs better lyrics, and production. Invest in yourself and your music, from what i heard doesn't sound like you're serious

Jam not bad but vocals can be clearer.The style of singing reminds me of the earlier years of Carlos Santana,the dragging words.Artist needs to put more clarity into the vocals so it wouldn't be a strain to listen to the lyrics,not bad,needs clarity.

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Man as long as you do it for the love keep on going strong but this was pretty hard to listen to. Like i said, as long as you do what you love opinions don't matter.

So far the beat nice Im thinking this guy is making sweet love to this beat because this beat is incredibly dope shit! But this guy sounds like a mixture of Rite said fred and the quiet storm radio personality lol this song is funny i could see myself getting a good laugh outta this i think with music you should most definitely have an open mind especially when listening to new artist and not really knowen what to expect from there artistry My ability to create would conjure up something dope to add to this type of goofy shit although i know id take it somewere else i feel like mistah has a unique voice it actually fits the tempo of the beat really nice Good quality i like the little outer space touch it was real space ghost coast to coast like

Love The Grooves and Smooth Barritone Flow. Awesome. MANY N IDEA COMES TO MIND AN VISIONARY SEXY SCENARIO'S CAN BE INFUSED WITH A VIDEO. I am really feeling this piece

I THINK YOU HAVE A BASIS OR IDEA FOR WHAT YOU WANT TO DO ON THIS PROJECT BUT THERE ARE SEVERAL THINGS I NOTICE. THE FIRST THING IS WHAT GENRE DOES THIS GET MARKETED TO AND WHERE DO WE RECEIVE AIRPLAY FROM THIS. YOU HAVE A VERY AMBIENT SOUND BUT I WOULD SUGGEST REFINING YOUR VOCALS. I COULD TAKE THIS AS A DEMO PROJECT AT MOST. THIS IS UNDER PRODUCED AND WOULD NOT MEET RADIO QUALITY. YOU HAVE A GOOD IDEA, I THINK, FOR A TRACK THAT WOULD BE SUITABLE FOR MOVIE PLACEMENT OR A DEPARTMENT STORE PLAYLIST. I HOPE THIS IS HELPFUL TO YOU!

You need to get a better microphone and you need to work on your scene and also you need to maybe put a sock over the microphone that might help help but anyway do whatever you need to do just make sure when you put your music out that it is perfect so nobody can judge but only giving you a half of a star because seems like he didn't put effort

extremely slow start and wait hahahahhahaaa no way bro are you serious! not one to just bash someones dream but naw man it aint gonna happen. this sounds like a snl skit! if you aint on your local charts. sorry man i cant you serious but thank you for the laugh. quit

I AM DIEN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! OH MY GOD YOU ARE KILLING MY SPIRIT, AND SOUL. I DON'T EVEN KNOW WHAT TO DO, FOR THE REST OF MY LIFE HAS CHANGED SINCE I HEARD THIS PIECE OF WORK FROM http://www.numberonemusic.com/mistahqbiz2... WOW! IF THIS IS NOT COMEDY, THEN I HAVE BEEN ON A PATH OF DESTRUCTION FOR THIRTY SUM YEARS OR ARE JUST REALLY HIGH RIGHT NOW AND FELL ON MY FACE, HIT MY HEAD AND DIED, CAME BACK TO LIFE, SHOT MYSELF IN THE PENIS THEN GOT HARD AND RE-DIED OF BLOOD LOSS AND THIS IS THE OUT COME OF ALL THAT AND A REVISITED ACID TRIP LEAK-IN FROM MY SPINAL FLUID... MAN KEEP KILLIN THAT SHIT HOMMIE... SINCERELY; RODGER VERSATILE MCDONALD

hey there keep it banging ;)

OK I'd like to start off by saying I love the old school hip hop vibe of the track itself. Now it was hard for me to tell if this is just your style of rhyming or if you made this song as a joke to kill some time. Now if this is your style of rhyming I can tell u that its very unique and different. Different doesn't always mean bad;but your style is something that will have to grow on people. I can honestly say you are in a league of your own which the world would have to learn to accept. Other than that keep doing your thing sir.

So when the record started in knew I was going to be listening to a banger. Unfortunately I spoke to soon. The build up for this song was just was to much. But then I listened more as the beat settled and was surprised that the vocals weren't mixed properly. The way the song was sang, (im sorry if im being straight forward) Sounded like a pervert. Not saying what you're saying is perverted. I guess its just way you sang it.

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blessed like ur idea need some more work in mixing, the voice sound too separated from the beat the lyric is good u are trying to capture ur audience with the vibe sexualy let them feel like the song is caressing there body and in order to do that everything got to be flowing as one overall u got something with a difference just need fi tweak a little big up

Greetings I like the production. I felt like it was missing a female singing back to respond to what you were saying. Other than that keep at it. Best wishes