I just hear a beat and the quality needs to be up to date sounds like u recorded that on a kareoke keep practicing and ull come up with better beats and better lyrics other than that give the game up bra it ain't for everyone

i like this track i can vibe with the beat and lyrics, the structure of it is nicely put together, great beat, great sound, audio is clear and sounds like something i would listen to alot actually

if you were going for like a pop type sound I don't really know what type sound really going for but whatever you're going for you really need to start off with the beat because it's the beat or the instrumental is not good then nobody is going to want to listen to it and so far from what I'm hearing I don't know what somebody just made it was Russian but it needs a lot of work

an say I like the track I support all artist I see tryna do they thang and i will stayed tuned for more like videos mixtapes and more so definently keep up the flow and if you have time check out the music I can say I like the track I support all artist I see tryna do they thang and i will stayed tuned for more like videos mixtapes and more so definently keep up the flow and if you have time check out the music

ounds good to me. the first time u started by the way u talkin to me like that in the Bakwoods, and the best. I have been the most part of my favorite is not a good time for the next couple weeks ago. it will be

I SUPPORT LOCAL ARTISTS LIKE MY SELF AS WELL I LOVE YOUR MUSIC AND HOPE I CAN GET YOUR ATTENTION AS WELL BUT LOOKING FOWARD INTO WORKING WITH YOU. STAY FUCOS AND HUMBLE YOU GONE MAKE IT BELEEE DAT

This beat had too much going on in it, some of the sounds are off tempo. I think you would do better buying some tracks online from a good producer that can help with your creativity. I don't know what genre of music you're trying to fit into either. I think it would be good if you looked into writing techniques as well.

The only reason for the negative rating is because this music is not my style of music and the flow is not what I'm used to hearing. The beat also sounds crazy which is also why the rating keep pushing tho bro

I respect your vision, put some more effort to your lyrics, paint a picture, help me visualize how bad she got you sweating! And blend the music mixes better so it doesn't sound all jumbled together

good stuff keep up the good work man , all about staying yourself nd being original nobody can take that from you . keep grinding, going hard. putting in work a lot of people don't want to see u shine ! but just keep up the energy flow character and hunger. take a look at some of my songs and let me know what u think. song was cool and i was feeling it so good shit like i said sounds and shit is different i likee it

I was trying to figure out where you were going with the beat first. That is what catches your ear first. At first I thought it was go-go. Then I realized you were just having fun. Very creative on the sound placement.

It took me a while to catch the beat. You reminded me of my dad doing his Lil rap because he don't like today's rap or r n b so I can understand what you did lol funny with the punches nice job kool

This right here sounds like a song you play in front of people in their mid 40's and early 50's. Sounds like an island version of the gap band, I can't really stand those sound effects in the back ground..it sounds like the outside of a dump site. Not a bad song, but some of the claps are off beat and it sounded like you didn't have enough time to write lyrics. I love that bass line though and hope you give something more to dance to!

Well you are different!! I think you need time to perfect what it is you'd really like to do. Maybe try and actually write a song?? It sounds like you tried to freestyle it which is cool but maybe not for you!! In any sense, be blessed and continue working at it!!

This is something I can sit back and smoke to, has some humor, very creative check out my new single #LoveThyHaters