Good concept but there are no lyrics just a hook. Fill up the song to give it more life. Definitely needed to hear more context and substance, just being honest! But practice makes perfect. And it's just constructive criticism so don't take it to heart!

First of all the beat is hot and the intro is very invitational. The hook is catchy and nice, and the lyrics are pretty good. Overall I see greatness in this song. It has potential to top the charts. Keep it up!

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Your music is great and is deep keep it up and you'll be going places you never really thought you would be going and i dont think it will take you anytime at all because the music/product speaks for itself so all you really need to do is stay focused and consistent and all that you strive for will come ten fold in no time but i really dig the tracks so ill appreciate it if you keep me posted for any future songs/videos you put out but all in all keep it up and im liking what im hearing

can fuck with this my guy, you have a cool style bruh bruh, its different and dont sound like other people shit having your own style is a plus thats is how you win the game, the song has a concept so that's a win! The Hook and verses are on point as well, the only thing I could criticize getting the song mastered to bring the song out more , but other than that I say you did your thing on it, we need to link up, I'm from Memphis and I Rap and shoot videos

I got a lot of respect for what your doing. I got a compilation of my uncle BugleBlack who is number one on N1M here in Los Angeles. Can I send you an email of this beat to hop on? Regardless you'll blow up and down the way, if your ever on the WEST coast,.....fall through.

Bruh you got real skills enough to be on radio like foreals.we diffently need to work I have a few tracks to can put you herre is my number and email let me know whatchu think (916)621-7791 go-getta da paperboi

This track took me back to the eighties kind of reminded me of some of the rap from back then interesting but had me playing it again and again cool work man I appreciate the art and keep it up

You really have talent. Keep up the great work and continue dropping hits! You really have talent. Keep up the great work and continue dropping hits! You really have talent. Keep up the great work and continue dropping hits! You really have talent. Keep up the great work and continue dropping hits! You really have talent. Keep up the great work and continue dropping hits! You really have talent. Keep up the great work and continue dropping hits!

This is a dope track right here fam nice beat and a nice flow to bring it out I always support indie artist they're the ones who always come up with the best material and sound hungrier then the signed artist keep up the good work fam

This has to be the worst band I have ever heard. The song totally SUCKS! These people can't be serious. I would not like to waste my time please. Do these people really qualify for publishing and distribution of music to the public?

The song seems very indie, nothing like I ever heard before. Personally its nothing I could see myself listening to on the daily but I feel with a fan base interested in that genre, you could do numbers. As well the recording quality sounds pretty amazing, being a engineer myself; all vocals and instruments incorporated into the track sounded very clean and crisp!

Man you gotta keep trying one day you will be where you want to be dont give up it might get hard for you but dont quit trying to perfect your style. AND find some industry instrumentals. ok

I just now finished listening to your Crooks Don't buy no guns & I must say this was actually one which has caught me off guard due to your style similarity, far as theme to your song relative to some of my own...All in all depends to me, weather or not it was freestyle and how many takes you took besides the first...For me all my work if Freestyle first take on all Lyrics...Good work keep it up...

You really have talent. Keep up the great work and continue dropping hits! You really have talent. Keep up the great work and continue dropping hits! You really have talent. Keep up the great work and continue dropping hits! You really have talent. Keep up the great work and continue dropping hits! You really have talent. Keep up the great work and continue dropping hits! You really have talent. Keep up the great work and continue dropping hits!

I love the message. It is a dope concept that has a lot of ways that you can take the song. I think the flow needs some work, unless you were going for the late 80's sound. Overall, good concept. Definitely need to get some work on the flow and riding the wave of the beat. Make sure to keep working. Music is all about expression of one's self. Keep it going

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