I was initially thinking this song is waiting too long for the vocal to begin, then I realized it's an instrumental. However, I liked the feeling because the music has a wonderful feeling to it that speaks in any language. A nice tune like this one can feel swirl all around them offering a comfort of reliability and predictability that a soul can actually nirture one's self with. Thank you for requesting the review on such a nice song.

wow great instrumental just a beautiful song love the muscianship......... ........this song has a really good synthesizer. lines I can hear this song over and over....................they the song was put together is very unique...................just love the way the piano and keyboards sound they are spot on they were played perfectly...............can't say enough about this song ......................I want to thank you for letting me review your amazing song thsnk you.......... This is steve from voodoo dancer and thank you again.....................

Saludos, bendiciones y muchas felicidades por tu propuesta...un saludo desde México!!! Te felicito por la frescura y originalidad de tu propuesta...no dejes de seguir creando música y poesía....abrazos de luz!!!

I like the chords in this track. This has a bit of a melancholy vibe. This would make a good backing track for a dreamy ballad. I guess it would probably be a love song. With some real wistful lyrics and a nice, smooth vocal this would make a really good song. As it is, it's just a nice vibe. So, I guess you could say I want much more than this, LOL

I like the production sound. I can feel the heart in this showing you put in some dedicated work. I like the originality and the tempo of this track!!! Each instrument carries it's own weight perfectly!!!! Sounds like the studio vibe was chill I could sit back to this one and zone out!!!!! More artist should study the roots of their culture of art more to be better at their own art. Keep up the good work and stay in the lab creating new material to stay fresh and on your toes. Peace!

Here is a lovely structure for a tune, but it is a fantastic foundation that is crying for something to be built on top. Some lyrics a poignant lead singer and perhaps a nice guitar solo to embellish what is already there. It is a lovely start, but at the moment it does not constitute a "song" yet. Please keep working on this and complete it and resubmit it as it is lovely.

Ciao Monica! :) Il tune e' molto bello, rilassante. Lo vedrei molto bene come colonna sonora. Penso pero' che con una voce questo brano darebbe il suo meglio (faccio un genere simile! Mi ricorda un po' la mia canzone "Stella Cadente"). Oppure, se non vuoi metterci una voce, potresti aggiungere diversi strumenti per far crescere la dinamica, magari con disegni diversi (pianoforte, dei violini verso la fine, una sezione ritmica ecc). Credo sia davvero promettente, pero' mi sembra un po' incompleto per questi motivi, per la mancanza di dinamica. In ogni caso, mi piace molto l'intenzione, quindi brava :)

The song is great! A really chill tune to end your day with. Production and playing is wonderful. More songwriters need to hear. Instrumental songs are my jam! Thanks for sharing your wonderful talent with us!

I have to say this is very nice guitar skills and the music is very mellow. This does have a Metallica 'Nothing Else Matters' vibe to the music. If I was going say one feedback for the future however this is my own personal preference is try singing on the track or work with a vocalist. Anyway overall very good job and you definitely are very talented.

Yes.. I want much more than this.. it starts like a nice track.. and then nothing happens.. I thought there at least would be a bit of vocals. But anyways.. nice sound and chords and mood.. Just need some lyrics and a leadsinger

Buen día Mónica, muy bonita tu composicion...estos instrumentos del inicio de la cancion inspiran el contacto con la naturaleza, me hace transportar mi imaginación a una cascada y un bosque en un amanecer único y especial.... La tranquilidad y paz que transmite la canción son especiales... Sigue componiendo así... Porque lo haces entrar a uno en trance y meditación con la naturaleza....estare atento a tus nuevas composiciones... Saludos y muchos éxitos desde Colombia. Un gran abrazo......

Hi, I want to give an honest review. The guitar work and the melody were beautiful and calming. I feel like it could have used a nice lead guitar or piano and the melody itself would be the accompaniment for the song. I saw that you were a singer songwriter and was hoping to hear your voice. Just remember, music is like ice cream, not everybody likes every flavor. Keep plugging away. I think you should hum along with this melody, find a pattern and write some lyrics that fit. This song is begging to be sung.

Howdy Monica, I enjoyed your melody very much. The music is beautiful. The acoustic guitar work is excellent and the mix is great. As I was listening to the Intro I found myself yearning to here the "Lyrics" I do hope to hear them, sometime. GOD Bless, Your friend, Jerry

begli accordi. ma per fare una canzone anche strumentale. ci vuole. una. melodia altrimenti sembra una base dispiace dirlo. ma e'solo un bel giro di accordi dato che il giro e' bello prova a mettere una melodia. col piano o violini!

Hi Monica - just had a review on your track. i am multi-composer running my own publishing with a global b2b distribution. well, we all started somewhere/somehow. there's a market out there for instrumental and also acoustic music. But the competition is very hard, even there you simply need professional recordings to get foward, what means you still have big upside potential on song arrangement, sounds and mix of your recording. there's a huge market for instrumental music today for media/videogames & apps where we also formed a global B2B distribution to gain some attention. so it depends what goals/targets are. "if you check our website" we launch "snowflakes" a wonderful acoustic song DEC1, so even in this quality hard to get high attention... either way, wish you best of luck.

In listening to your song, I found myself waiting for the vocals to kick in. But it never did. I don't know if this is simply the rough track for your song or if you haven't got lyrics and it is meant to be an instrumental. It is a very nice melody and left me feeling relaxed but wanting to hear a melody and song. As far as the track itself, you have a nice mix of the instruments, guitar and keys, that carry the listener along a very tranquil journey. In other words, if this is only an instrumental, please specify that in the future after the title. That way, the listener knows ahead of time what to expect. Anyway, you have written a wonderful soothing track, so keep writing and good luck!

Ambitious composition with folk-elements in soft melodical style. Nice dreamlike tunes on acoustic guitar performed and additional keyboard sounds in the backing. For the first demo-track a creative recording with some kind of meditative moments, but the chello sound producing a to low signal of frequency. Overall a nice tune with potential and listening with open mind can lead to emotions.

Greetings, Thank you for choosing me to review your work, I count it an honor to be included in such a task. My hat is off to you and anyone willing to step out and share their gift, talent and love of music to the public. Be it a musician, singer, song writer, actor and so-on. I myself, via 40 some years of experience in the fields, on the road, in the studio, radio, TV, video, and management, consider myself to be a seasoned musician, singer, song writer, studio-sound tech/engineer/ owner/operator, stage manager, find it sometimes hard/difficult and perhaps not even fair to sit in a seat, voicing My Opinion concerning another's creative efforts. Especially in certain genres of music I am not all that familiar with concerning very important elements that make up and meet the required standards to justify the various levels of ratings and grades. So, in saying ALL that, I will limit myself to MY Opinion concerning the quality of the work according to My ears, and the standards I have been familiarized with thru-out the years. I hold to the old - saying " Beauty Is In The EAR of The Beholder ... LOL. The sound quality of the recording over-all is very crisp and bright and clear, I really enjoyed the guitar work in this song, except for hearing the metal of your fingers sliding on the strings..Think about a music solo, melody break for a short period in future works. Something to give the listener a break away from the repeated guitar playing of the same lines over and over. The guitar volume and tones-voice, are smooth and natural, sort of - down to earth as they say, and extremely peaceful. The mix levels let me know who was still in charge of this song. Very easy to sit back and listen to. I mean no offense in any part, I myself take all feedback and use it as a tool toward my next project. I pray you feel the same way. Either way, I say to you, keep doing what you do, keep kicking and enjoying what you do. I tell folks all the time for many years. When it stops being FUN, then it's time to stop, and stand back and think about what we are doing, why we are doing it, how we are doing it, what we and others are getting out it. Is it what we want, and how we want it. IF NOT. what are willing to do from there? Thank you again for asking MY OPINION. Johnny