Love the beat, caught my attention straight away. But I agree with "charminandmusicalinsightfunctionsband" Feel that your not trying to be original but rather a copycat of what is already out there. You guys have got a of talent. Would love to hear something without all the bleeping. You got some lyrics there, maybe dig a bit deeper to find words that will help tell the story. This is a good production!!!!

good work keep it up!

TOO MUCH SWEARING!!!! Its really not necessary. It will narrow down the listening audiance for a start and will only be geared towards a particular audiance. Lyrically offensive and disrespectful in places. Itt would definitely have to be XXX rated. The melody line for the singing is catchy but very minimal in comparison to the amount of rapping. I get the message in the song but there is just too much necessary swearing in it. And the term "Niggas" is very last year gone by ages ago.. if you get my drift. Its a tired expression as far as I am concerned. I guess you use certain lyrics to get the feel you want but seriously!! You cannot use Gods name is something and in the next setence use an expletive. It makes no sense. I could only listen to this a couple times just for reviewing it sake but I do like the music I have to say. Sounds like the music my son produces. Lyrically it flows though I have to give you that but I just dont like the swearing... Not bad. Good production though.

I love your passion and your intensity in your song, I am not to keen on the cussing, you are very powerful, Your words are powerful, so when your rapping you are penetrating peoples souls, bless and not curse. But I do love how you rap and the chorus is amazing.

I liked it but I would go through a better producer so it can be flushed out better. I like what your going for but your sounds need some mix and separation. Other than that I like the changes and movement. Keep the Rock on!