interesting sounds but i can't finf in the intro something that really keeps my mind; also the development is a little boring;when a melody or something in the song keeps the mind of the listener , it is the most important thing, because he then say “i buy”; you could improve to be more catchy; good luck and keep it up!

The ambiance is just great but the song would need one more pattern to create a build-up. I understand that electronica music offers non-standard structures songs but a build-up could be to increase the intensity of the entire song. HUMAN AFTERMATH

Takes awhile to start.... Maybe cut off the first 40 sec. Without any awesome melody line and lyrics kicking by 1:05 I am now lost. It just repeats like a broken record. Changes up at 1:55 in but then back to the same. Add an amzing melody and then some climatic changes and decreases. Tell a story. Right now it's just someone sleeping who left the TV on and doesn't realize that the home shopping channel kicked in.

like it! minimal! nice vibe! cool night music...