You have a unique voice and the complex melodies work well. The only thing I would say is it seems more electronic than rock per say, and sometimes the electronic elements are perhaps a little overpowering, even by today's electro standards. Other than that, I think it's at least a solid beginning with much potential. Keep at it!

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