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Everything was cool until that riff came in and went super fast song went downhill from there you should have left it how you had it in the beginning try to finish with that one

Better live show and lots of light and open air. Good stuff, but lyrics rather indistinct. Real toe tapper for the young ones. Good luck!:)

Very cool. I liked it a lot. Great beginning although the transition when it picked up was a bit rough. Nice little riff throughout. I have to agree that your guitars sounded a bit out of tune but overall you rocked it.

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not bad production. Please tune your guitars before recording. The lyrics are a bit too obscure 'kids dancing on my teeth?' what does that mean?!? Main vocal needs to be stronger and less spoken

The chorus sounded cool when there were multiple voices but the verses would have sounded better with some reverb or any effect because as it is, the song sounds very very raw and unfinished. The beginning is sort of hard to catch on to as well. but the end of the song to me is the best part of the song. it rocks really hard! :> I'm putting 3 because I liked a 3rd of the song a lot the rest was ok

The guitars are out of tune; didn't anyone notice that?. The part is not bad; but the vocals are rough and un-charismatic.

Nice song. It has a nice built-up, changes themes, so listener doesn't feel bored, and intro and outro are simply great! Good job!

Interesting. The intro and 1st verse came together decently. There wasn't enough of a build before the heavy guitar came in... I like the thought behind this song. I think a little more work into the dynamics and you might have a really great song! Not bad! Good luck!

nice recording production song needs more direction esp before hard assed guitars come in lot of distortion in driving part chorus-weak part of song singing could have a little more expression during verses like change of pace at 3:00 has a little Green Day ending flaccid like my pecker in old age