I like this track bro!!! I think the delivery is dope, really catchy bars!! The consistency is there, u are one the the Harder artist on here!! I really fw how clear u sound on the mic!!! Keep it coming bro and stay grinding fam!! Salute to u bro from South Carolina!!! -Delorebel

Yo, what's good? Dogz One here and let me tell you, "Mental Thoughts" featuring Twan is straight fire! This track is a true masterpiece that hits hard with its raw and emotional power. The beats and the mix are on point, creating a dynamic and captivating sound that draws you right in. The flow is impeccable and their storytelling is simply amazing. The way they deliver each line and paint vivid pictures with their words is truly artful. The rhythm and rhyme style are smooth and polished, seamlessly blending with the melody to create an addictive and unforgettable sound. The cadence and flow are simply mind-blowing, gripping you from start to finish. "Mental Thoughts" takes you on a journey through the deepest and darkest corners of the mind, making you feel every emotion that Twan lays out in front of you. Overall, this track is a true standout that deserves all the accolades it gets. It's a must-listen for anyone who loves rap music. "Mental Thoughts" featuring Twain is a phenomenal production that showcases the true artistry and talent of these amazing artists. So kick back, turn up the volume and let this dope track speak to your soul! Regards Dogz One

Like the beat like the intro good vocals on point keep up the good work... When you get the chance swing by and check me out leave a review it helps when artists network like i said good grime good song

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This was crazy funky. I like your approach to the record. The instrumental was crazy and different. This needs a video asap fam. I can see you just chilling at a bus stop with a guy playing the trumpet next to you. This is very creative. This was crazy funky. I like your approach to the record. The instrumental was crazy and different. This needs a video asap fam. I can see you just chilling at a bus stop with a guy playing the trumpet next to you. This is very creative.

I dig this. Kind of a New York Drill Funk type of vibe starting off then turned into a Southern Trip Hop type of joint. Everybody might not get it but I do! Great Job Guys! I listen to various genres!

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I would love if you can make me some of your profound beats i like your art can we hook i have a record label in South Africa if you interested drop me a mail we can work together on a track i can release it in South Africa and Africa you can introduce me to more radio station is the USA get back to me

It's definitely different and I think it's your art and I'm thinking it reflects what we live through and we all have a different walk and I see that you look at things from another stand point and it catches your attention by the sounds and the beat and then you tell your story which is your art

I dig your style man very raw art very Bradley Knowles, the early Sublime kinda raw was the way it made me feel, or like 311 back in their evolver album. And the way you started it off was completely a new sound to me, I never heard anyone do it like that before, fresh man fresh. Rock on man much love

Love this beat this shit ???????????? and u was gonna carzy I DON'T KNOW I CAN'T PIN POINT WHAT IT IS ABOUT THAT VOICE THAT JUST GIVES ME THE CHILLS. VERY UNIQUE. AWESOME TUNE. " "I like the singers voice and would like to hear more. The hook is good. I listened to the tune three times because of the flow." "The voice is lovely, like chocolate. This is pretty original, Quirky. Some of the chords are quite different "Very warm voice, I think is the right voice for the lyrics, beautiful song!! Keep going ." "Song catches me right away. Nice instrumentation and nice development and layering of the opening melodic statement "Great mood set throughout the song... Love that breathy keyboard sound. Good stereo separation. Overall great song."

Ain't nothing like that Penn Flow. Y'all keep the highest crime rate so it's only good to say that the talent is there. You and Twan should come West to campaign in Las Vegas NV for a few weeks. My name is splitendz the Profit from Los Angeles CA however I reside in Las Vegas NV furthering my crafts. I have a street performers permit for the Fremont Street Experience Downtown Las Vegas NV and I can definitely get the 2 of you to perform Infront of massive crowds at a time. Great networking and music video exposure. Keep in touch and if not, just keep the hip-hop alive bro.

One of the Dopest emcees you were ever come across his delivery is very creative. His style is unique. His beat selection is crazy all around good entertainment. Can’t wait to see you at the Grammys or at the billboards. Great work keep up never get discourage. Keep going keep going keep going, the world needs to hear your sound. Maybe we can work together one day soon with all this going on in the world today it’s refreshing to hear songs like this

The music was very unique. I enjoyed every aspect of the eeriness of the beat and the lyrics I would rate seven out of 10 the song total to me I would give an eight I definitely like this music and would come back from war.

Music sounds good not sure how long you been doing it or if it’s something you are perusing or just doing it because it seems like the thing to do but there is always room for growth. Considering how hard it is to break thru the industry but the production is good rhymes are good mix is pretty good I can’t really judge from one song but all I can say is keep up the good work

Bro... This is a really good joint! Just being honest, I'm very surprised to hear a good song, based on some of the trash that's on this site. Yall Intro and Outro are very catchy. That beat goes hard body. Yall rhymes are tight, flows is on point. - The grind is intense, yall stay focused, and keep making joints like this.... Yall gone get there... Good job..

I like the originality of your work. Strong message and creativity is a big plus. Good production, I can hear some good vocals to this, good job on the final mix-down. I can tell you have your heart and soul into what you do. Keep on pushing and never give up or get distracted in pursuing the dream of making it. I like the instrumental blend of sounds with some vocals and the production on the track is good. Keep up the great work! Peace!!!

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First verse started, with a decent flow and rhyme scheme. Although it sounded like you just started freestyling on some parts. Second verse was okay for the pace of this beat. Just not sure of the direction he was going with it. I believe there is more potential to drop some fire. Keep up the practice.

all the way through bro u doing ya thangy thang G! good work on it cant wait to hear more music from you bro im down for a collabo check me out aswell. only go up from here papa!!!! again saluuuuute and big ups on your career