This piece was definitely from the heart. You created a beautiful melody which, of course, is the most important part of composition. Weaving in the second instrument, created a nice variation. I would be careful with such a beautiful melody to not create too much dissonance in the harmony by holding long tones that are intervals of a 2nd, or not within the harmonic structure. Use dissonant notes as simple passing tones. Sometimes simple is so much harder to create, based on some of your other pieces. It is hard to tell with the advances of technology whether or not this is a real sax, or an electronic version (Likely electronic based on the correctness of pitch and breath variations). Adding more vibrato, clearer articulations and variations in your dynamic range would have given this beautiful melody the focus is so much deserved. Also, changing the octave range, and adding even sparse repetitions of the melody or harmony, in the piano accompaniment would have also given the listener more variation. It is clear that you wanted to keep the feeling of the piece calm, almost serene and you definitely accomplished this. Well done! I enjoyed the way you showed your vulnerability. You definitely honoured Dio!

The song dedicated to dio by Phoenix2kx is an easy entrie to a landscape writen in your eyes by a fantastic film in a very smooth surounding by nature or something else that makes your senses sensitive. A film with this noise surounding makes your senses clear for a real message, maybe a message of truth about life and rebirth. Enjoy listening this song, it is a smart and smooth experience if you let it be. So much success for your music and stay on being unique humans. the cows

I like the Sound it could have spoken word or some type of poetry, would love to here more and hope this artist is successful and . I can also here this in a movie intro or game intro. so keep up the good work

Nice relaxing tune. Swivelling through the airwaves. Somehow execellent to meditate, do yoga, relax or just chill. Simple but mesmerizing. Imagine yourself floating between the dolphins, in an emerald ocean, above a purple sky filled with dark orange clouds. A flock of seagulls design mysterious patterns making your mind become one with the universe...