great

good mix and effects, but too repetitive... potentially a good song

nice intro cool track

I am not sure what direction you are planning to go with this material - techno sythe volume was good but faded in and out to much - Vocals came in way to late and not loud enough to hear the story trying to be told - I suggest you get in with a quicker vocal w/ more volume - I thought the song was entirely to long - shorten it up a bit - get vocals and volume levels a little more precise

Imma tell you the truth it did take to long for you to start singing the song you gotta grab my attention within the first 10sec. Now I did like your song the lyrics were great to me love that concept its new and sounds intriguing. My advice would be to get some real production in a real studio then you would have shot in this music industry.

great sound but almost ineffective with catching the listeners attention. seems like an intro would be necessary for this track... keep up the good work

Inventive and it's obvious you had fun with this in a very creative way. I believe the redundancy as mentioned by some others is a planned structure of the medium and the ambiance; which I believe you have successfully achieved. You might want to look at some of the levels on different sound sources (if you haven’t already)…but that’s not a negative comment, just an observation. It’s your mix; and it’s nice and it definitely works like it is. Kudos…

A bit redundant in places. nice backing music to a point. I liked the outro vocals the best of the whole song.

not a bad track

thought is was well made and enjoyed it.

a professional sounding track keep up the good work

nice sounding track although the synths could of been slightly better leveled, some seem to get slightly lost.. but overall i like what you're doing, keep it up

VERY HEADY AND TRIPPY COOL SONG TO JUST KICK BACK AND FLOAT GOOD PRODUCTION KEEP IT UP YOU ARE GOING PLACES. SEE YOU ON THE GRAMMYS IF NOT I WOULD FLIP OUT. STAY TRUE

Good beat generation and synth accompanyment. Pretty linnear though. Words deveplpopement and clarity can uas a little work. The intro is too long. What are you trying to say with this song. Not too clear about your message. Electro bop is not my cup of tea so it's gotta be mor grabby and interesting to get my attention.

Really good effort, makes one wants to close the eyes and be transported to another space. Some instruments seem to be a little loud but overall really good record.