The slight change-up @ 1:50 puts a needed break in the tune, but was hoping it would have lasted a little longer. Overall I really like this, it's well put together and has a nice groove to it. The vocals work together with semi-dark theme and the mystery of the song. My suggestion would be to expand on the break @ 1:50 before going back to the original beat. good work.

Good song. This is good for a movie track or clip, maibe. Good work with guitar sounds. Good mix and good voices too. But I think that it could be not too long.

good sounds in the intro, the voice is appropriate and the arrangement is good; i'm a melodic but i feel your song;when a melody or something in the song keeps the mind of the listener , it is the most important thing, because he then say “i buy”; in my opinion your song is original with catchy elements; well done and keep it up!

I LOVE the ambiance mixed to the groove of that song! I like the voice repetition in the chorus which is a good thing in this kind of song, I believe. HUMAN AFTERMATH

so slow, so boring, u have something that could be good and sucked the life out

Very Euro sounding..digging the tempo! The vocals could possibly come up just a bit, but overall the mix is good!

Fun Intro, I would love to add a female melody line and then add back in the robotic male vocals in between the verses.

Cool vibe. The production sounds good. There could be a little more arrangement involved to keep the listener more interested and a solid hook would be a good cure as well. Keep striving to be the best...

15 sec intro "Great!" I was hooked,, outstanding job...

interesting cloudy pop passage! nothing pretentious but solid build of atmosphere and vokals that are unobtrusive. nice piece of work.