Nice song, I like the instrumental, but I think you should find a certain phrase to put in that could give it a catchy ring or flow to it. Keep up the good work..

interesting and cool atmosphere in sounds, but the song has no a really catchy and huge moment; when a melody or something in the song keeps the mind of the listener , it is the most important thing, because he then say “i buy”; well produced and performed it is a pleasure listen to the souds; good luck and keep it up

Set the voice a bit louder in the mix. Nice percussions sounds. You could add a new part to create accents and climax. The beat is a bit repetitive. New parts would make us appreciate more the existing parts. HUMAN AFTERMATH

This piece had me in a mystical zone and also had me gripped and compelled to listen to it from start to finish. This isn't the genre of music that I would go out and buy but it was a good listen. The vocals were on point and not drowned out by the music and it sounded like it has been mixed and mastered professionally. Everything was on point and I thoroughly enjoyed the escapism feel from the hustle and bustle of this hectic world. Overall a great piece. Well done and keep up the good work.

The song has a very nice atmosphere and the arrangements are good.

Music is tight and has good intensity. Maybe it's the genre, but I just found too much repetition and the lyrics really did nothing for me.