Very hypnotic, and the lyrics are quite poetic, they sound like they need a dub in a simultaneous alternate sound, to make them stand out. But, raising the volume on the vocals could be enough. 3 stars

This is genre that I'm all too familiar with, but I was able to listen to the whole song, so that's the first plus. I got a sence mysterious gothic dancers in those lyrics. I thought it sounded good enough that clubs would do well with pumping that music out to the crowd. My like of experience with this style of music does not allow me to provide any useful constructive criticism, so I have to stop here.

vocals need to be louder,would fare very well at Halloweeen.seriously though its not bad, i like it.ts from old school remnants ,but its still good.Clearer vocals would enhance it more for sure .Not a bad Spin.Gluck with it.

hey the track is pretty repetetive and i get it its house music right? The lyrics sound like something from the cure back in the 80s. thats not a bad thing though. It has alot of potential. my personal opinion i would liven the track up some more and dont be so blah with the lyrics and your delivery...you can make this song fun for people to listen too. Im not an expert on music and i know mine has flaws as well. just trying to help out. you guys have alot of talent and i would like to hear more from you in the future

I Really Liked Your Song,Mma Old School House Lover so Wen I Heard This I New It was Something Special hope to hear more from you soon.

hi how are you doing. i like the song, the mix sounds good. its not really my kind of music but at the same time. i know good music when hear it. as far as quality , it sounds very good. one of the switch ups in the beat didnt sit well with my ears, but for the most part it all sounded good.

there are obvious comparisons with kraftwerk, etc.. but i hear a nice ambient feel as well... a nice subtle beat, so it's not too ambient... like brian eno with a danceable beat... i know a lot of people who would be into this track... nice...

I love the feel of this track. This style of track is very popular right now and you've done it well. Something I would listen to and share for sure! Nice work. Perhaps think about a stronger hook line, or taking the line "dancing with no fear" and adding an extra effect, or harmony to make it pop. I've also started experimenting with vocal layering of the melody and it can add to much to a track. Try it! Over all, really like the track.

This track has a Kraftwerk feel about it. The synths are interesting, but parts of the production has lost a bit of dynamics. Maybe create a bit of space by having the drums coming in later and build the tension by adding instruments a bit at a time. The mix is well balanced, and the vocals could do with a bit more mid range, and slightly less effects to make it big and fat. I like it.

Kinda reminded me of Kraftwerk, but more melancholic. Too repetitious for my personal taste, but as per other reviews, could see 'Buffalo Bill' doing his dance in front of the mirror to this. Production was good though.

Wow, this song has a wonderfully haunting effect. The atmospherics and the beat are great, and the lower tones create a feeling of dread, that is impactful. Very atmospheric. It would be interesting to hear this effect with a more driving vocal and a more forceful melody, but still, this is a very effective piece for the atmosphere and mood it creates. Well done.

Sounds like it could make a good soundtrack for an horror flick, but the voice needs to come more upfront, as its hard to hear the words clearly. Nice beat. It matches the voice perfectly. keep it up. St. Thomas , Jamaica

This is certainly a mind blowing work....dude u are gud!

this.... sounds like some creepy.... movie thriller with a killer... following you in the back of an alley. And everytime you walk fast, to try to get away the killer walks up even faster to catch up with you, i can hear this on csi newyork they play songs like this.

this.... sounds like some creepy.... movie thriller with a killer... following you in the back of an alley. And everytime you walk fast, to try to get away the killer walks up even faster to catch up with you, i can hear this on csi newyork they play songs like this.

well kind of "the wall", but no excitment. Listen to some pink floyd, catch the use of arrangement to build the song, and yes the voice has to much effects and pushes it way back, lost. The haunting quality can be effective, but i cant hear the distintive instruments, everything is melting together a bit too much. Maybe some rythym change, or a new section, you are much too comfortable with what you have written, just spend some more time with this one, and you could have a great song, randy becker - venture records

I like the title and the haunting quality of the voice. The lyrics have a nice hook, and the beat has somewhat of a "dark" vibe which matches the mood of the song and vocal well. The instruments seem to drown out the vocals a little . With a few adjustments in the mix this song would have a better chance for success, but overall good work! Continue chasing your dreams and working hard and success will follow. Best wishes!

Moody...reminds me of some of the darker tunes Depeche Mode produced. The melody could be expanded a touch...the verse and chorus melodies are too similar (as is the harmony). The song seems to build confidence towards the end as the vocals aren't as tentative.

No se entiende nada, necesitas mezclar mejor, la musica muy fuerte. El trabajo es una buena idea, pero hay que perfilar mas Flansi Suiza

Yoh! This is nice music. Thank you. I can't wait for more. Bravooo!