original sounds but with feeling; i like the choice of instruments and the arrangement; probably the melodic line is not so good, a little boring and not so feeling; anyway a good song also for the orchestration;when a melody or something in the song keeps the mind of the listener , it is the most important thing, because he then say “i buy”; probably the jazz part is not so appropriate in my opinion; good luck and keep it up

good voice good, arrangement piano lead is good love the way he skips and trips down the hill

The song is a little too long to keep the audience attention. Very good mix and ambiance. Reminds me Sade which is a good thing. Lyrics could be reviewed to really reach the heart of the listener. It could be great to hear the lower tone of the singer sometimes in the song to create variations. HUMAN AFTERMATH