Your lyrics are totally awesome and it has a nice concept and vibe but it sounds like you're reading your lyrics from whatever you're writing it on I'm just giving you my honest opinion it's all I can do good luck in the future

I mess with your style bro, its different, having your own style is how you win the game, the song has a concept so that's a win! The notes are on point as well, the only thing I could criticize is that your voice could of been a little softer to bring the song out more , but other than that I say you did your thing on it, we need to link up, I'm from Memphis and I Rap and shoot music

Hear ya story. Keep doing what you do and keep improving. Love to see positive images flow thru. Can't say much just come better than this next time. Will be looking for ya voice. Wish I could type a little less gotta keep it real with ya tho in ways I got to. Keep doing you overall n music is nice.

You really have talent. Keep up the great work and continue dropping hits! You really have talent. Keep up the great work and continue dropping hits! You really have talent. Keep up the great work and continue dropping hits! You really have talent. Keep up the great work and continue dropping hits! You really have talent. Keep up the great work and continue dropping hits! You really have talent. Keep up the great work and continue dropping hits!

real life and i can feel that message delivery nice lyrics ill hook im diggin it nice track also so just keepin it coming so im feeling pretty much the whole vibe so youy know what it is salute and peace

I get to the money was supposed to be coming by later and I'll say but I'm trying to be like a Laker Laker Laker Laker fabric Maryville Tennessee Tennessee Tennesseekeep it going keep it going keep it going keep it going keep it going keep it going keep it going keep it going keep it going if I can get it Get It Go Get It Go Get It Go

Can say I like the track I support all artist I see tryna do they thang and i will stayed tuned for more like videos mixtapes and more so definently keep up the flow and if you have time check out the music I can say I like the track I support all artist I see tryna do they thang and i will stayed tuned for more like videos mixtapes and more so definently keep up the flow and if you have time check out the music

I like to be I think the beat is really hot is is complimenting the flow you got good substance and you're actually talking about something so you're not just rambling now I'm mumbling on the track overall I think it's a really good song man keep up the good work man hope to hear a lot more from you

To be Honest , My Internet On My Phone Is Slow Asf At The Moment . I Need To Make Some Coins , But Message Me Your SoundCloud Or Where Ever I Can Find It And I Will Check It Out When I Get A Chancee To be Honest , My Internet On My Phone Is Slow Asf At The Moment . I Need To Make Some Coins , But Message Me Your SoundCloud Or Where Ever I Can Find It And I Will Check It Out When I Get A Chancee

I like a great synth on a track, and this song is based on strong dreamy synths and a simple drum pattern. The hi hats keep you in the game and the lyrics woooaahhh my man got me changing the initial ratings I gave the track. Love the hook ad the strong vocals... At first I thought the mix down with the voice may not work, with the dream effect but nah he killed it. It is a great song that although could be tightened here and there.. I would put this on my playlist.

I think this song is ok I like the beat and the hook on this song my first time listening to this on here and I will like to hear more may we can work together on some tracks I'm king Qezz from Detroit

This artist can write lyrics, spit them out, and expand on his ideas with equal ability, and has jazz and soul-influenced beats to back him up. If you are a follower, and buy whatever the crowd is buying, THIS IS NOT FOR YOU. However, if you are like me, and you love well-made, revolutionary hip hop music, do yourself do yourself a favor and give this a listen. I would request this to fans of Mos Def or Talib kweli. Overall this is a nice addition to any playlist.

Song is overall dope. The lyrics speak to me, simple, but that's exactly what you expect in realtalk: Spitting straight out of the mind. Mixing is clean. What I feel could be improved is the beat. It's good, but it can be a lot better and contribute to the overall. That's the reason why I give you a solid 4.5/5. Much love from France!

I like the message and the unique beat. For me, it just seemed like there was a lack of emotion to carry more weight in the verses. It was kind of monotone. Comfortable flow. Other than that good work.

The beat sounds a bit poly tuned but the kit n snare sound beautiful lyrics are not bad at all let me know about future collabs I like the track keep it up good job flow is nice let me know about working together