1980's vibe opening the doorway to a Dillon style vocal with the depth of thought expected form a lyrical poet .The chorus feels weak, not as complete a thought as the verse. Interesting figuring out the story behind the song.Trundles along with a dissonant edge .Cute synth at the end.Not my cup of tea but keep writing.

non male la partenza di questo pezzo con una voce interessante e un brl ritmo il cantante ha un bel tinbro ma negli alti non convince col coro sembra un po meglio il pezo non eì malvagio ma per essere bella questa canzone ha forse bisogno di meno stonature ma si pèuo' migliorare

Upon your very first listen to Wilmington, Delaware's Red Bungie Band and their fabulous "Going Down", you cannot help but to be deeply impressed by the musicianship, the inspired songcraft and clever production values. While the musical influences of Red Bungie Band are fairly evident, there can be no doubt about it - this band definitely has their a sound all their own. Highly recommended!

I'll start by saying I like the approach you are taking with this tune utilizing the keyboard as your primary instrument. But there are a few items that I feel a need to comment on in your production. The very first thing would be you are using way too many words in your lyrics to get your point across. You should go through each line and get rid of the throwout words that aren't needed and this would make it not seem like you are rushed to try and sing them all. In short, shorten some of your lines. You are trying to sing a song that has verses more in the style of a rap song. Next, I would redo all the vocals and work on hitting the notes instead of what you now have, which is all over the road at times. And finally, redo the production with a remix that you reference on several different mediums (home stereo, car stereo, phone earbuds, etc). Good luck in the future and keep on writing!

Going Down by Red Bungie Band is a very hypnotic and catchy rap/experimental rock tune that has some real stream of consciousness musical vibes and a good energy throughout! The singing has real originality and a good rhythmic flow. I would keep an ear out in the future to keep up with these guys.

In the pulsating fusion of rock and hip-hop beats, reminiscent of the folk tunes that painted the 60s with nostalgic hues. This musical alchemy weaves a contemporary tale where genres collide. The song, a rhythmic journey through time, carries the echoes of an era long past, channeling the free-spirited essence of folk music from the 60s. The vocals in the refrain, while attempting to soar, seem to stray into dissonant territories, creating a subtle discord. It's as if the singer, in their earnestness, has lost the pitch-perfect path. Here lies the crossroads of artistic contemplation. A troubadour, perhaps, with a voice that aligns seamlessly with the song's soul, could be engaged to traverse the refrains, transforming the slightly discordant melody into a harmonious crescendo.

R&B _HIP HOP RAP wow nice some rap/R&B/hip hop AWESOME .this song has a really good melody lines I can hear this song over and over.............................they the song was put together is very unique..........................just love the way its sung the vocals are spot on the drums were played perfectly........................... i can't say enough about this song .........................I want to thank you for letting me review your amazing song thank you.......................... This is steve from voodoo dancer and thank you....again.....................

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