His lyrics are dope but I have to be honest the voice don’t fit the song It should be sold or put somebody else on it It’s a dope song but the voice overtake the track Which makes it hard to grasp But I’ve listened 5 times Keep going you have a great writing talent

Like I always say there’s no good or bad music just what we put into it specially when it’s the truth it as even more beautiful yes we as people really do need to get it together we only strong enough together I like this song an it deserves five stars because it is definitely the truth I we all could see it most definitely undeniably the facts of the matter keep doing what u do keep keeping it Truth

it's Twenty-Kay Lyrical-Killer ZA here from South Africa and I would like to say that your music is magical keep up with the good work never give up I also like the recording process as well your quality is on point

The track is alright. The messagevis great.bthe beat is different. The rap is orifinal. The track is ur own style. Howevet, this is not grammy material. But i feel your plight. Lyrically u speak mad truth.

A very nice song that is, appreciation post keep up with the good work y'all. And I don't know if I should say this but I'm gonna say it anyways I'd like to work with y'all on a project we could make a very dope track. Peace and love ❤️✌️

alright on this track that was done before the pandemic started. I like the beginning of song on how it start off I do believe that there is a band playing the music instead of a beat machine which is good i like that you all did song with playing instruments it shows you all have talent I like the lyrics too song about getting it together. Look forward to hearing more Red

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bro! first of all, i never but never expected to hear such talent. I'm high & I really enjoyed it! the beat ?!! bro got pure talent!! everything feels natural. i give this rating because its pure talent!! but i think the mastering could be better! how did you come with such an idea ?? the hook is well executed! the harmonics and everything fit well. a good song with a smooth vibe. so like I said the whole composition could receive awards somewhere!! keep doing music you are a real boss!!

I feel your concept but the song had too much going on with the band. I would maybe pick a new beat. Voice control is crucial in the industry. Lower the music and let your message through. Lyrics are in style nowadays. Overall I have to keep it real, the song has to come together to be taken seriously for marketability. Google a few exercises that give focus on projects. You'll find that having a regime of practice improves your ability. Keep the lyrics!

The beat is not so hot but the vocals and the overall message is empowering and it's what a lot of people need to think about and not just think about And really need to take it in or hands physically and take apply actions to help save our own self

The melody on the rapping portion makes me cringe. And thus why I gave the song 2 stars. It seems corny, simple, too basic, reminiscent of something an artists would do when first starting out. Now, i'm big on constructive criticism, and not only talking about the negative. With that being said, The only reason I chose to give you guys feedback is the harmonizing. That aspect of the song reminded me of Robin Thicke when he features on a couple of lil Wayne songs. "Shooter" and "Tie My Hands" Far from sounding like Robin Thicke but you definitely showcased potential and honestly good enough if the MC came in Spitting some fire, some game. Some knowledge. Something provocative. etc. Getting it together is a serious subject matter that I feel could be expressed in a more swaggered out confident manner. Saying things that challenge the listener but also creative in the sense of using analogies, metaphors, word play, and not the cheese delivery. as an artists,, I feel You absolutely can not do a song and say this isn't a song we did to sell records, unless you do it like Kanye West did "Jesus Walks" I recommend writing 3 or 4 different delivery styles for the rap verses then picking the best sounding ones. then re uploading this track. I'd love to hear what you come up with! Hope this helps, Best of luck, and keep it up!

The message is encouraging and I am sure others will run to get it Whatever you do always make sure you put your in it. It does not matter how down you are right now always put yourself back together and rise again to the top.

the idea is great. I like the idea. but you have to be structured. and let the instruments express themselves. adding a good folk guitar would be good /also work the voices in synchronization : otherwise it's good

Very long song but I like it overall soul islands ???? type of music is the vibe i feel from this song keep up the good work. The mix is clear enough to here your message but a little tweaking on the beat and vocals you have a hit song basically.

heat homie nice n smooth you got a video to this one if not u should shoot one homie mos def feeling this 1 fwm beats collabs etc lets work You on spotify etc if so send me link i follow you etc salute keep mashing respect Lets work homie respect