quick answer to your question ....does this work... simple answer ..nope it doesn't ...the rappers singing is better than his ( or there i think it may be more than one , but it also could be overdubbing a copy of the main vox ) rapping. the track is good , but again loop repeated throughout , how lazy is that , way too many other the rappers on this site are guilty of that.. but the thing that brings down this production is the rappers timing is often off , and sounds like he's reading it from a paper , but not very convincingly.

i DON'T KNOW WHAT TO MAKE OF THIS..I KNOW IT ISNT REGGAE,DONT REALLY HEAR A RAP BEAT EITHER..THE LYRICS ARE THERE,BUT NOT REALLY SITTING ON THE BEAT..THE DOUBLE VOICE DOESNT NEED TO GO ALL THE WAY THRU THE SONG..BACK TO THE DRAWING BOARD BRO!

A very good evening to you and thanks again for the request to review another one of your great Songs "HE BLESS MY HANDS-RNA" Which may i say i found your track in my own personal music opinion to have a strong message in your lyrics and the Production was first class with great sound levels and very clear vocals,well done truly enjoyed reviewing the Track.

You are doing great job just keep going and doing what you’re supposed to do. By working with people that are willing to work with you to make a better hit. Nice job and keep it up. You are on the right track.

I like the style , but the beat wasn’t lined up properly , bars are solid tho. You got real talent so you can get better as you progress. Maybe try a different type of beat?. Looking forward to what you do next ????????

wow nice some rap/R&B/hip hop AWESOME .this song has a really good melody lines I can hear this song over and over.............................they the song was put together is very unique..........................just love the way its sung the vocals are spot on the drums were played perfectly........................... i can't say enough about this song .........................I want to thank you for letting me review your amazing song thank you.......................... This is steve from voodoo dancer and thank you....again.....................