I believe the rapping kind of out-did the musical content of this track. The bass and drums could have been a lot more dynamic to take the song out of the comfort zone. I believe the 'note for note' keyboard / lyric combination was perhaps a little over done in the choruses too. There is definitely the makings of a good groove here, it just needs a little tweaking to make it shine.

nice track

Dont like the beat. I actually mess with the flow more then the track. The hook was horrible tough. wasnt digging the singing at all.

im feelin this!! im sure if he had tha right people in place to make a move for tha radio, he would get it..catchy hook, bridge, breakdown..ITS ON!! tha arrangement is dope, tha mix is solid... KEEP IT UP SON, THIS RECORD CAN DO SOME SHYT...peace.. cwest & mickey slapp

Great rap song needs AirPlay great production Great melody,hook and lyrics. Monster hit in the making. Look out Jay Z.

I am not a hip-hop listener, but I know good music when I hear it - this is a very good piece of music. I like the rhythm, the beat and definitely your voice. Your accent is an added bonus to the piece. You have great melody and the lyrics are very good as well. I would have loved to hear a bit more bass to go with your beat, but outside of that, it's very nicely produced.

Really good vox flow, groovy drums, the bassline could be more present in the mix and you could add some notes to make the song groove more. Keep up the good work HUMAN AFTERMATH

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Yeah this a a good song , reminds me of Australia,s biggest hip hop act hilltop hoods , i think the synths are a nice touch , some nice inter woven little keyboards pattern in the mix , i like the snare sound , the lyrics are good , i like that line life is a game of chess , i like the hook , it drifts across the time almost in a lazy fashion which really works , i think it shows some nice skills , sounds relaxed which really comes across well , i think the double tracked vocals are great nice use of the multi track , after a few listens it get better , WELL DONE !

First off, you killed it, the delivery was great, you have a great theme and the beat was perfect for your lyrics. I do have to agree with "thapaperchaser" the vocals were a tad bit flat....I feel that you just need a little gain or amplifier. The beat is really good it does not drown out your voice. Nice flow man keep it up.

Like the overall sound and concept well put together could be on a soundtrack of a european vacation for an american film, or most definitely could be in a foreign film. Great continuity,good work..

I like the whole concept"the track was kool, the lyrics were on point with a good message.The hook is the meat & gravy! The only problems I heard were the vocals were a little flat, (MAY BE THE MIC). Also the track needed some effects on it, just a better master on the track.I definitely think this track has potential in it.Keep grinding.

I think its a very good effort,i lke the way the music flows with it.Parts of it, sound like old Kinks Pieces.Still it is what it is, and its a good beat.Some background Harmony Theme to it, would be my inclusion,however, these are my thoughts which probably wont matter much to ya.Good creativity at work here keep it up,you may get there.All the best to you in the new year ahead.

GREAT tune, GREAT melody. I love your vibe on the catchy instrumental. The story line is on point and the message is clear. LOVELY!

Didn't even have to listen to the whole song to know this would be good.But when it finished I thought, this is different and this time different is GREAT! The lyrics, melody, mix, chorus are all great.Only thing I would have made this were some female vocals in certain places but other then that. Keep doing what you're doing and don't stop.

i want to start by saying the flow for this song was very on point, Rowl-E has a incedible adaptability to this instrumental. i also took notice in the instrumentals steady build and different components that cut in and out keep your mind wrapped around the steady changes. thing i wanted was a third verse with maybe a more destinctive beat break down, only because his word play was hot so the break down would be a better focus on what he is actually saying. but besides that i really enjoyed the song.

Honestly think the instrumental was hot. The whole hook and lyrics flowed according to the beat. Only thing is the artist may need to find someone with a better mic because the vocals seem as though it was made on a bad mic. and he mixed and mastered it to make it sound alot better. I use a usb condensor mic. called the snowball and its cheap affordable and with the right mixing it would be fire. Other than that you have a hit and radio ready.

Finally a rap track that attempts to differentiate itself from the gangsta rap ethos.I've always had a soft spot for music made in the UK, no exception here.I do feel however that the track is missing that final slice of greatness.Perhaps if you added something to the rhythm ,the beat is a little bare.Maybe a more interesting cymbal pattern to give the track a sense of urgency.Good effort, my favourite of the genre thus far!

I love the originallity it's like hihop version of ters for fears with your accent. I like it it's very different and unique. Keep being you and don't change for nothing "dare to be different".

too rigged instrumental I like