jammin

Gostei muito da voz, sampler bem legal. só não gostei do inicio, no mais a musica toda é bem legal. paz sempre.

Good content. Lyrical word play could be slightly more effective. The instrumental has a lot to do with captivating audience. Feel a different one may have suited better, at points it seem to drown you out a bit b/c of the kind-hearted emotion you are putting on the track. Good job on being on cue with the beat. Put a slight different effect on ya chorus or voice changes to make them distinct. Keep up the work.

I can't really say it was a bad song. It had a good meaning nd good lyrics. It sounded nice. I jst felt like I was listening to tupacs dear mama song. But nice work either way.