Good bass line, very good voice flow, especially at the beginning of the song. Maybe it's a bit too fast at specific places 'cause we're losing the words a bit. Original hip hop/rap track! The song could have a new part to create a build-up, right after the little "break". A new bass line and a keyboards' melody could take part of this build-up.

Finally i'm hearing a rap that doesn't sound like all the others. The arrangements are very fine with surprises here and there but not too much to make the instrumentals too confusing. I like it and well done.

Rock remix and rap and it makes good? You wonder me! Nice work and i like it - respect;) What can i say about? Maybe this song need for add female vocal, but anyway it's your song and you create! +5 my reply Contact me - vanboollen.ucoz.de, vanboollen@yahoo.de (say about yourself)

good sound, rythm and arrangement; i feel your sound and atmosphere, very catchy; when a melody or something in the song keeps the mind of the listener , it is the most important thing, because he then say “i buy”; well arranged, performed and mixed song; good also the rapping. good luck and keep it up

This is a good song. It's different from what i'm used to hearing but you are from the UK. I really like the production and the lyrical content of the song. The story line behind the song is nice as well. Great Work. Keep it up.