Hi Aireez, I listened to your song.. and I will say I was first drawn in by the vintage and classic intro that began the record. The turning point where it becomes a bit awkward to digest as a listener is when the 'Hook' begins. Reasons being is that there is so much processing added to your vocals and centered into the speakers, it leaves no room to really grow and make an impression. Firstly, I would suggest, removing some of your heavy process 'Phasing/Chorus' effects that you have placed on your backing vocals. In fact, what you can do to make this better is duplicate your gang vocals (4 Total). 2 backing vocals should be dry (No MAJOR processing effects) and 2 which have effects on them. PAN the TWO dry backing vocals about 20% LEFT + RIGHT. Set your 2 EFFECTS heavy Backing Vocals 80% LEFT + RIGHT and LOWER the volume at least HALF. Doing so will allow your Lead Vocals, to sit perfectly centered with clarity and your other backing vocals emphasizing with the melodic tone. I do look forward to hearing a edited version of this, there is potential to grow into a really create piece. You have great writing ability / storytelling! MSG if you have further questions! Kind Regards, Camron

Gotta say Aireez DaRychuss delivers a truly cohesive and complete lyrical experience. He shows his lyrical capabilities while maintaining that entertainment factor that holds some artists behind. It's really interesting to hear the way he conveys his messages. Deep meanings with metaphors that really make you pause and contemplate what was just spoken. Pretty solid production, mixing & mastering as well. Overall this is good song but don't stop here listen to his other music as well.

This track put us in the feel of an OutKast..... Wonderful how long have you been doing music. You have a true talent..the professionalism is there 110% ...please let us know where we can support a few tracks with purchases. Our artist is now following you. Great job!!! Check out our artist sometime.. #NEWFACEOFHIPHOP KINGWEEZY music and Movement found directly here Originalwritermusic dot com. Where did the inspiration from this track come from? Keep pushing you have a new fan.

your delivery on this song is on point eye really liked the lyrics also. Was digging the subject matter , feeling the beat too. Was not to fond of the hook it sounded a little dated but all and all a good song

Listening this this track reminded me of listening to Gil Scott Heron, I really like the flow as well as the sincerity of the artist as he took me on a journey describing his deep feelings for the woman he was in love with, very nicely done.

Outstanding Beginning and end i enjoy the concept of the whole thing it was Good Bro thank you I really enjoy it never give up keep it up Excellent Job P.S. Stay humble Stay Blessed Because You Are Blessed And Don't You Forget That In Jesus Name Amen

YOU RAP GOOD AND FLUENT. KEEP THE GOOD WORK UP AND DON'T GIVE IT UP..I LIKE THE RAP AND I HOPE THAT IT IS NOT THE LAST SONG.IF YOU DON'T HEAR THE WORDS I AM SAYING. JUST LIKE PAC THE WAY U SOUND. YOU RAP GOOD AND FLUENT. KEEP THE GOOD WORK UP AND DON'T GIVE IT UP..I LIKE THE RAP AND I HOPE THAT IT IS NOT THE LAST SONG.IF YOU DON'T HEAR THE WORDS I AM SAYING. JUST LIKE PAC THE WAY U SOUND.

Hip Hop is NOT my thing but here goes. I had difficulty interpreting what was going on as it was difficult to gel the music (too low) with the vocals. It seemed to be the same throughout minus a hook. What sounded like it should be an entertaining piece left me not understanding what was being delivered. Not sure why the music was not mixed to the audible level where your musical prowess could be experienced. Objectively, if you heard one RAP you have heard them all. Would have liked to have heard something that would separate this effort from the rest. That didn't happen.

Its a situation we all can identify with i can tell. You put some time im to the lyrics i can understand every work would love to hear more music from you in the future keep drop hard hits i also edit and shoot videos you can check them out on youtube under Derrick Crawford i will be putting my music out soon i will keep u up to date and i will do the same

Heartache and pain to a soulful bassline, i like it. Lord knows I've been there so I can relate to the song. You're saying something without all the cussing (thank you). The overall vibe to the track from the flow, content, and beat all work. Personally I would of preferred to hear at least 1 pattern change maybe, plus when the hook comes in, the phaser or chorus (whatever effect used) kinda over-coats and distorts the awesome harmonies sung. Overall tho man nice track man!

I like this cause its on the real, the hook needs just alil adjustments,but other than that i like the vocals homie, keep doing your thang dont give up, the only way to go is up. But you right everybody plays a fool. #Salute

Your flow is tight but I think the song is to slow and there's a certain part of the hook that is all over the place but other than that the song is hot bro. Keep up the work your sound is unique