The intro has many words although I cannot understand., melodies which may or may not be connected. The atmosphere is like a speaker at a big meeting, not very personal and smooth sounding. The background is smooth and clam, and it is well-positioned although cloudy and unclear. The music is not disturbing but is not impressive.

Good Day, Fellow Artist. My Honest "Opinion" is this: Your instrumental was wonderful. Your Subject matter and Song As a whole was great. Things you should work on however would be as follows: Work on your Vocalization, Try to Harmonize more with your Melodies, and a true song, to be successful needs a "Hook", and although you have a sort of hook, it really needs to be defined and add some back ups and perhaps some ad lib would be nice. I fully believe as a song writer you have potential, and humor and would like to hear more in the future. Good luck fellow artist.

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this sound very isldand like It could use some more work on it tho. I think that you could add more lyrics to it other than that this is your style and its different be glad.

I love the intro and the music production was good I speak English only so please next time if you want me to Review your music send a lyrics sheet in English. I must say with my ears for music and I listen to the way you spoke in rhythm to the beat. Thank you for trusting your music with me I am honor. St. Louis, Mo.

I love da beat and instruments, sounds pretty clean with a good mix. only problem is I speak english and cant understand the lyrics