Seren Skies brings us Obscurity... a trite 80's style punk tribute of emergence. Unfortunately it sounds as immature and full of one takes as the music of 30 years ago. The vocal style is also inline with the type of song and it too is as raw and unrefined as the rest of the song. Other than a tribute style song this piece offers little to the listener and producers perspective at all.

OOh. Great intro riff. Classic rock 'n' roll high school beat. The whole song is upbeat and major in mood although singing about the darker subject of depression. Feels like a great song for young folks who may feel alone in this crazy insane world. Keep up the amazing work. It reminds me of the GoGos (i think Belinda Carlisle was lead singer?) in that pre-punk new wave / surf summer season (we weren't naturally inclined that way in NYC, so it always seemed that bit more exotic that sound for me) The chorus could increase in dynamics at some point near the end, just to let it stand out more. It's a good catchy verse, be good to have it protrude in relief from the body of the song. But all in all, perfect job, good luck!

I get asked to do reviews for people so I feel it is my responsible to be honest . With so many people now making music and putting it online for others to hear it is becoming increasingly hard to find anything special . This song in my opinion is just another song That falls way below average. The guitar is ok but really just standard stuff. The voice is honestly monotone and without interest. There seems to be a lack of imagination in the writing and when this is the case the listener feels this and stops to be involved in the listening experience. I don't like giving artists bad reviews but if you put a song up for review it is normal that certain people will tell you the truth. There is not much more to say about this song Sorry!

The Obscuririty dominates with a strong pop beat and a punk oriented vocal melody line, catchy and memorable. I think the structure it is well put together, the overall sound and mix can be enhanced though. Vocals fit the genre and can come out more in the mix and you may want to play around with some effects. When recording the vocals try to think that this is the very last time you ever have to opportunity to sing this song... and give it all that you want it to be. Let yourself go rather than being conscious of hitting the right pitch. In the break I would bring the level of the guitar up as well.Keep going and you will make good song into a great one.

This song reminds me of Transvision vamp With a touch of Blondie and the Ramones I would say it sounds more like a happy tune rather than someone dealing with depression. I like the chorus. Nice and catchy, And the link between verse and chorus works well. The break where the drums drop out sounds a bit messy tho and the endings quite strange. vocals Sounds like a cut and paste of the first line, I think it should be sung slightly different, I think the word "Days" could be sung lower leading to a natural ending . But in general it's a good song and the recording and production sounds good . I've heard a few of your songs now and I must admit I'm warming to your voice, I wasn't quite sure at first . All the Best Steve .

This reminds me of old school rock n roll with a splash of punk in it. Really like it. Has a Joan Jett vibe to it. Your voice sounds really strong as well. Great hook in the chorus. Keep up the great work.

Yeah I´m listening as I´m writing and I´m very impressed, I lke the sound,, also the guitars , the energy of it all , and the in your face posture. What can I say It´s better than what I am, cause I don´t really have a band, and have to work harder to get a sound that is acceptable.. I can see that if you keep doing it you will go a long way and will have a bright future,, While enjoying yourself a lot. So I wish you all the best never give it up, Keep in touch if you want. Good stuff. Cheers SeaG

First I want to thank you for sending me your track to check out and give an opinion on it. To be completely honest with you I can relate to the lyrics because I have some depression myself. These lyrics are very deeply written & beautiful. Keep up the good work.

At first entering made me think of 'The Pogues' in the soundtrack to 'Sid and Nancy' great guitar and drums. Really love the title: 'Obscurity' …Some Times Things Get Ahold Of Me. Great Lyrics.

Nice lively start to the song, once the vocals come in it reminds me of great 80's chick rock. Nice little chorus which I like very much. You need to work on the vocals a little bit I can tell from your tone you have much more bursting to get out. Love your stuff Seren Skies! P.S. a flashy little guitar solo would have fitted in there nicely!

Unfortunately, this song wasn't really my cup of tea, as they say. The music sounded canned, like it was machine produced, rather than actual instruments played. The vocals, although they hit all the notes on key in the song, I did not detect any emotion in them. Music is all about connecting with the listener, and I didn't feel connected to the artist in this song. Sorry...

I think in your genre, it will take really catchy songs. I think the idea is good, it can be done. Just keep working, I think it is definitely possible for this to end up as something

Your music has a great 70s pop sound to it it is very uplifting .And that is always a positive .keep up the great work.I like it very much.Have a great MUSICAL DAY !!!! Darrell Heath