Want this to be constructive as I listened to this on some cheap laptop speakers. The vocal is great but felt there could be better use of doubling and harmonies at specific points (specially chant/rap sections). The mix is blanaced but somethimes the keyboards pushed a bit hard and took over the song - try remixing from scratch and checking the freq bands aren't competing or cancelling each other. Also felt the song could benefit from some singing after the beat and as a whole having a stauration effect to glue it. To add a bit more pump to the song too try light multi-band compression to push the low end. Like the theme and visuals from the lyrics - Nice track Seren Skies :)

Australia's Seren Skies "Blue Veil" is a unique, catchy and textured track that draws the listener in immediately with a percussive guitar and sax driven groove that brings to mind Morphine and The Pixies. It's an extremely tasty and textured aural experience. Lyrically, it's slightly repetitive, but that's not a huge deal! Kickass work!

A strange mixture of old and modern sounding. Giving it an original feel. I thought the beginning was quite good I liked the guitar/ bass riff. The drums seem a bit low in the mix with a bit to much reverb making the whole song sound a bit messy, keyboards have a nice 60s sound and feel. The vocals start off a bit shaky but improves as the song goes on reminds me of Blondie (Rapture ) the chorus is repetitive and memorable but I think it goes on a bit. In all a good effort Keep on rocking :-)

This is my kind of music! The intro and the music is just awesome but maybe you have to work a little more on the back vocals and put some reverb on the main vocals, that's just what i think. your voice should more energetic too, with more passion! The arrangement is awesome to, so as the coda. Reminds me of the good old punk rock! Good luck and cheers from me. I will share your stuff you more often!

I love this track love especially the opening guitar riff which kicks in here and there throughout. I think personally almost like a stacatto rapping vocal fits over this rather than what you have done throughout the verses you have the right vocal melody through the chorus. love the old style keyboards sprinkled here and there throughout. Nice to hear some backing vocals on the chorus but they need to harmonise more with your main vocal.

I think that the oerformance is good, but there absolutely nothing original about this tune. the production is good, but there is no originality or hook showing on this song...keep up the great work

I love the Bass line in this song. It carries the song along that makes it easy to follow. This is a song that would go great during Halloween time just like "Wooly Bully" and all the others in October. I Loved It ~

The beat is my kind of beat you sound like Blondie which is good because she had a few great hit keep up the great work maybe you can let me rap on the track with you .CaNy Entertainment

I LIKE THE MESSAGE OF YOUR LYRICS. THE SONG STARTS OUT WITH A GOOD CLASSIC ROCK FEEL. AS IT PROGRESSES IT BRANCHES OFF A BIT. PRODUCTION WISE I WANT TO HEAR ALLOT MORE METALLIC GUITAR. THE VOCALS ARE BALANCED WELL, I HEAR ALLOT OF INFLUENCES. MY FEELING IS THAT THE SONG GOES IN TOO MANY DIRECTIONS AT ONCE AND DOESN'T REALLY HAVE A HOOK THAT GRABS YA. THIS IS A GREAT START. TAKE THIS SONG AND SIMPLIFY IT A LITTLE AND GIVE IT A METAL HEART TO GO ALONG WITH THE VOCAL SMOOTHNESS.