Overall the song is pretty decent. You can tell your a very positive lyricist and that is a huge plus for most listeners. The flow was a little off at some points but at the same time it works out because the lyrics in your song was very necessary. Keep working on your singing it needs major tuning, it would add more feelings to your music. But as an artist your original, you dont sound like anyone ive heard of so thats a huge bonus! Good Job!

song was alright but if u choose to do a Drake beat you gotta kill it but otherwise you did a decent job.

song was alright but if u choose to do a Drake beat you gotta kill it but otherwise you did a decent job.

song was alright but if u choose to do a Drake beat you gotta kill it but otherwise you did a decent job.

song was alright but if u choose to do a Drake beat you gotta kill it but otherwise you did a decent job.

song was alright but if u choose to do a Drake beat you gotta kill it but otherwise you did a decent job.

song was alright but if u choose to do a Drake beat you gotta kill it but otherwise you did a decent job.

song was alright but if u choose to do a Drake beat you gotta kill it but otherwise you did a decent job.

I really couldnt pay any attention to the lyrics because the beat is old and played out.. The Quality of yur recording is great tho . i gave yu a 3 just because i know how hard it is to get a descent mix off wen yur first beginning . try a fresh new sound .goodluck

pretty dope for someone new to the game. keep it homie, hard work pays off and never let someone tell you that you cant do it. thats the best advice you can ever get. Keep it up.

great music love to sound keep it goin

Old School with a taste of New School - Vocals were terrific - Kickin' it down to Earth - Lyric was positive all the way - I'm hooked

This is an ok track , sounds a little green in phrasing , but a decent job was done !

I like it; not bad for one of your first attempts as you said. The music is tight and coherent, lyric's are good as are the vocals. Keep it up.

shit tight pimpin flow real good lyrics was good keep doin ur thing

Your Swag is nice,and the beat is also great, but I think you need to work on your Concept to make it go well with the melody. Great Job!

You have to go hard over a beat like this and I don't feel you did so but I like the concept . Keep working on your delivery.

this song lacks a little somthing somewhere am not sure what it is yet but when I fiqure it out i will let you know. I enjoyed it though it has a solid feel and is pretty smooth in my opinion when it comes to the flow.