Yes this is a great track... It is short, but Swayzi Ali drops enough bars to make 2 5 minute song, but he aint slowing down, you just got to listen fast. With this quick witted onslaught over a ghostly sour beat, he comes across like one of my favorites, you know a rapper by the name of Andre 3000, well yeah, his vibe is alive in this flow. I enjoyed this 1 minute tirade so much I have played it almost 10 times. To add to this there is a real message behind the punchlines, a real student of the game with a purpose to really trying to be the change in the world that he wants to see out there in the game of life. I really should be giving this a higher star rating, but somewhere deep in me I know Swayzi is not the type to bask in that, you want real constructive feedback... isnt that right? Well here goes. Your concept is on point, tight however, your punchlines seem to get lost especially in the faster parts of your flow. Further, some of your ad-libs come across clumsily and really need to be sharper or at least eq'd in such a way that it does not bump into the main voice, causing the impression that your timing is off. Apart from that... let em tell you one thing, I really enjoyed this track... I am playing it one more time just for good measure. Well Done!

Hello, I just listened to your track, and I think you definitely have potential to make it and be someone great! I hear the flow and lyrical content keep perfecting your craft! Continue to stay motivated and ride to the top!

Nice it's always good to hear an artist try to be good at war they are good at. Never stop never give up trying to sharpen your skills. What u do no one else does and that's what makes a freebie artist

This shit pretty dope bruh. Your flow got the energy and the beat crazy. You should've made it longer tho. But for the most part, the track is cool and I'd give it a couple replays. Keep it different, keep your sound authentic.

Good music man like your sound have you been networking with other artists because it's all about networking and helping each other and supporting the wave go on my page and listen to my music

I like the intro to the song, the talking helped set up the tone of the track. The beat is straight fire on this one homie! The verse was on point from start to finish. I really appreciate it when you can hear the time and dedication that an artist puts into his craft, and I can hear that in this song. Your voice and style both sound developed and professional. The quality of the mix was great as well. Great work, Keep grinding boss!

yo swayzi ali what ive heared the song lessons (mastered) is a trap type hiphop track, now is trap not my specialty nore my favorit or go too hiphop genre, but what i hear is you tend to hop in the beat at a 3/4th note after the drop-in. now what ive said earlier now is this not my specialty but i think if you draw back ya vocals it flows much better along the beat.. i hope this will work for you,,, gl

 This makes me feel good riding in my car on a hot summer day while the top dropped playing it real loud nice flow to it nice beat lyrics sound fire on this track i will be playing this one for real

I love it. Lyrics are fire. This would be a great intro to your ep or album, then I'd go into an upbeat track to really set it off. Beat banging. Make sure your track selection isn't one dimensional & you'll be fine. Imma fan. Keep doing your thing fam.

Nuff said. The beat was a banger. The artist is on another level based on the amount of truth he gave in one verse. It makes me anxious to hear what's next from this artist that is capable of spitting a conscious hot verse.

I like your fast pace rap flow. You also had good production on this track. Very good beat to compliment your skills. You do have skills that will take you along way in the industry if given the opportunity to showcase it. As you know, it's very hard to get recognized with so many artist in the world. I wish you all the luck and nothing but the best moving forward. Never stop pushing. THE VET, COMPTON

Your music is great mixed and mastered. I mean I've found out the hard way by being so excited to jump on wax not understanding the patient wait order of sound. It means that you put a lot of class and attention to what you want others to hear. My name is SplitEndz The Profit here in Los Angeles and I'm number whatever in between 1 and 10 every week out here on N1M BRO for the Los Angeles HipHops category.

I like it. Sound pretty good. like your style. You have a nice rap voice. Just continue to push and keep on putting out. You sound good compared to all this bullshit ass music that's out here now. Keep pushing. Luv bossI like it. Sound pretty good. like your style. You have a nice rap voice. Just continue to push and keep on putting out. You sound good compared to all this bullshit ass music that's out here now. Keep pushing. Luv boss

Really liked this track. Good solid beats and a lovely melody on the chorus. Sounds good too, the mastering really helps the drive of the song. I love this honest unbridled type of hip hop, its what the genre is about. Great stuff bro, strongly recommend it!

Love how you dealt with this song king wonderful play on words and filled with energy you are very conscious of your surrounding and it's environ and that's going to make you a master if this craft #dakrazyway

lessons nice track i felling it short street songs lil g have to banger more art i can vibe with it but need more work just stay on it keep banging im here with you my man hd salute swayzi ali

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I think hip-hop needs more of this. I can hear the streets. It's just an overall real ass song. And to add it doesn't sound like anybody out now..its original. I can tell the artist put a lot of emotion into it which brings the track out even more..good stuff..