Love this..nice keep it up.

I like what I think you were attempting with this song, however you need some work done to get this to industry/selling standards. I love the message but the delivery still needs to be up to par. This song needs a distinct chorus, it seems more like a poem set to words instead of a song....based on format (or the lack thereof). It seems like a super long verse then "Yes Jesus Loves Me" is a bridge....cut your lines and insert a repeated, distinct chorus and that will up your song tremendously. Good concept overall.

Nice song pleasant vocalist .good palying nice lyrics but it needs dynamics (stops, starts, volume changes, modulations, etc.Arrangements can do so much for a song like this

vocals a bit too up front overpowers all nice chorus on gtrs nice vocal line but verse goes on forever wheres the payoff? the chorus??

Great vocals tells a nice message it could be simpler but still well recorded and mixed and feel and flow is great.

Weird combination of instrumentation and vocals. I would like a simpler arrangement, it sounds too busy. But there’s good message in the song and good singing

LOVE IT.GR8 JOB, KEEP IT UP!!!!!!!!

oh my god, this is not public level, this song harm to me, so amateur, and like a megasyrup