I love the unique vocal texture. (although its pitchy at times so I'd spend more time cleaning up the lead vocal) I'd like the song to be shorter and have a more powerful more obvious chorus - and get to it faster. Dynamically you could add/ take away elements to create a more interesting soundscape and support the story better. I think the overall mix is OK but is alittle thin and maybe add some stronger samples, punchier drums

The piano intro breaks the air of silence opening the way for a Beautiful voice to follow. The drums play an essential part building as the song progresses. There is a wonderful balanced mix that finds a background of airy chords lightly placed as the bass holds it together by walking and leading us into the next pattern. The voice is innocent yet powerfully forward with a very interesting story to tell. The background voices are tight and harmonized very well, Also good job on the panning... Excellent idea putting the trembling effects on the right side, It is counter-melody all its own. There is a message in the Lyrics. Good job keep up the great work. I am Stan Barnes and I approve this review...

I enjoyed the concept of the start of the end game. The lyrics make the listener pay attention and to process what is being communicated. The background music clearly supports the singer and the message. I especially enjoyed the harmonization. It felt like an old friend who requires no work and is always there.

Great song and recording, nice lyric and well presented. I always say to myself if this came on the radio would I change the station.This is a song I would listen to till the end for sure , well done...:)

The song is a typical pop song, well produced, well sang, interesting lyrics. The voice of the singer has an interesting touch, not being so clean. Good backings. In my ears, it could be a musical song.

Nice Intro. Verse melody is interesting. Lots of hooks in the song. While it does have an older feel to it, it's got some catchy feel to it that could work today. Just wondering, have you considered adding acoustic guitar? For radio you may want to edit out a bridge or two. Bring the total time down to about 3:30 . Good song

I really think this is a hood song. Only thing is some parts were off in pitch. I love the flow of the voices together to harmonize in areas. I also like the contemporary sound. Some parts I could not decern the diction and interpret the lyrics but I like that the voice is strong and consistent. The notes were all on point and that made some of the pitch incorrections go unnoticed. Good music. Nice and soulful. You can feel the emotion behind the music.

Promasing start and good choice of instruments and sounds. Voice tone of the singer is good and harmonys works well. Personally I would have used more time and ideas for vocal melody lines because now they are a bit dull and doesnt make me feel to sing along or even doesnt stick in my mind. Also this song is too long, would have been more interesting if it would be two minutes shorter. Good talent so keep on writing more songs.

When we heard this tune for the first time, we attracted it perfectly. As for the sound production, It's built up very simple, but very impressive. Also, the lyrics matches this melancholic and beautiful sound very well. You could lead the listeners from the beginning to the ending without boring. We think that you should put this song on sale all over the world. Great job!! You, guys!!

This is Nice Song make me relax and I like arrangement as a vocal ( You need to put More Heart in to ).. if You use Life Drums it will help also..I think it is good to perform life..try to send it to Radio Stations lets see what They will say ( remember that They are looking for Radio Ready Quality Recording ( a Studio Cut )...as a Music Publishers not sure about them all I know They are Very Hard to Please..and sometime I wonder for What They are looking for...I wish You good luck with pitching.. Good Job...

End game is a piece that reminded me of the fletwood mac, perhaps your voice, perhaps the musical metric but there are many traits in common, many sounds typical of the group that for a period of my life I listened to night and day. I think I gave you a great compliment but I also have to tell you that the piece has to be improved from the point of view of mixing and mastering to make it even more performing and nice. however, congratulations you did a good job

It's just so to easy to like this song... There is a nice simple structure here. The progressions and the phrasing leading the verses are so very nice. ( This song scream out for majestic countermelody string lines to bring it to a whole new level...) I Like it Thx for sharing :-)

Buena canción, bonita voz y buena instrumentación. Quizá le falta un poco de alegría, un poco más de fuerza, pero en general me gusta mucho todo, también tiene una melodía muy bonita. Los coros es otra cosa que destacaría. Good song, nice voice and good instrumentation. Maybe it lacks a bit of joy, a little more strength, but in general I like everything very much, it also has a very nice melody.

This song is remarkable because of the lyrics. They coming from heart and going hand in hand about dramatical situations and the development of events beyond personal control. The refrain is the message and makes the meaning of the song engaging for me. But the whole song is more various. The introducing starts off with a nice piano theme which plays the main role in this composition. It leads to the bridge and chorus also accompained by softly played e-guitar chords and sounds from the keyboard. The perfect drums and bass make this wonderful composition complete. Valentina sings about someone or something, including all the relevant characteristics, qualities or events, with dynamic voice and soft vocal projection. All instruments are masterfully played from professional musicians. This ballad reminds also on own problems and is not far away from normal radio hits. It´s worth to listen this song and if you like, add it. Let others know your recommendation.

I LISTENED TO THE SONG OVER AND OVER AND I'M GLAD YOU ADDED THAT WARM SAD KEY NOTE IN YOUR SINGING. WE CAN FEEL THE EMOTIONS. HOWEVER, IN THE BRIDGE I WAS EXPECTING SOMETHING MORE CRESCENDO WITH A PEAK HITTING THE RETURN OF THE LAST CHORUS. OVERALL NICE SONG. IN THE FORM...I THINK PUTTING A BIT MORE REVERB AND DELAY IN THE VOCALS MAY HAVE HELPED FREEING OUR VOCALS...GIVING MORE AIR. NICE JOB ANYWAY. MAY BE ONE DAY WE WILL HAVE THE OCCASION TO WORK SOMETHING TOGETHER ...;)

What a great song, and you have a beautiful voice, not to keen on the drums and tiny bit of reverb might help the over all mix, that said the song was very well orchestrated with nice flowing ups and downs, nice work.

Hello Immediately after listening to headphones, very nice sounds with this round bass that I like very much. And I find this voice with a little childish tonality, full of charm. I like the small passage to the piano, almost in the middle of the composition. This remains very classic in form, but it is well done and very well built. It's not the kind of music I usually listen to, but I like it.