This is track is nice. It has a nice smooth jazzy relaxing old school bet feel to it. The variety of instruments and transitions worked great as well. Nothing negative to add other than it could have been a little longer. This track has potentials for moving up the charts with some advertising. Looking forward to more from the group

This beat is very good. We sat up playing with it to see if we could write a song to this and actually did. So when a person of different taste can step outside there usual to make a creation you know the person with the platform has something to offer. You have amazing talent and can do alot. Keep up the good work, you are doing a great job dont let up or let anyone tell you any different.

Again another beautifull track. Very symphonic and it reminds me also of some of the music of Tangerine Dream. Has this track a message about a metal carpet? Maybe. As I know there is a theory about, that the airplanes in United States are sprying chemicals on the sky that are containing aluminium and other heavy metals. it´s not only happens in USA but all over the world. Is this maybe that "Fool Metal Carpet" Disenchanted Sow is refered to? Is that the inspiration for this beatifull intrumental song? Well........Some people are saying that they are creating that metal carpet on the Sky full of heavy metals for better implementating the new internet system of G5, that will be faster and better than other anny internet. A very good track with or without a hidden message. Let the listener made his conclusions.

En effet, c'est vrai qu'en écoutant le morceau on sent vraiment le désenchantement ! Personnellement je trouve que le morceau tourne un peu en boucle infinie, au début cela peut envoûter mais aussi ennuyer. Attention ce n'est qu'un avis, quand on compose dans certains états d'esprits on ne se rend pas toujours compte, je suis moi même spécialiste de ça ! En tout cas, tous mes encouragements !

The sound of this song takes you in happy safe places. I like the drum parts on the song this is the strength and the best part of the track that i thought it was the strong and kept everything glued together and it was a very basic approach.

I think you have to work a little bit more on it, the rhythm is nice and the harmonic lap is nice too, but I think they have to be mixed differently. in the end if you work a little bit more by putting a few different variations I think that a piece of high level comes out

Wherever I go i carry a recorder, and ideas crop up at times that are sometimes inconvenient, but, sometimes the idea I record is really the best example of what I intend to express. I get the feeling that The Disenchanted Sow's recording here is just that, a glimpse into an idea, formed during a moment of clarity, using what was available and making the most of it. I do that all the time and call it "Work In Progress" for myself. I have been known to share it, as I believe this track is shared so that people can have a very personal insight into the creator of the music, his process and his struggle to make things good enough to put out for the public. Thanks for sharing this with us.

A string arpeggio gives this track its distinctive beginning that progressively adds musical elements. The over feeling of the composition is sparse in nature and suffers somewhat from "Midi Music" quantization and the string chords not being separated. This makes the track sound mechanical not human. Here's a great tutorial, search for this title: CREATING MORE REALISTIC STRING MOCKUPS Harmonic Content For Strings. Do this and you'll have aa awesome song!

The song sounds good. I like it, it sounds like you could use some better recording equipment possibly, just a little muffled. I like the song, it makes sense. I am going to also think it is a little short that maybe another verse needs to be in it, and the intro is a little cool I thought so I'm going to check again. I like it so far after rechecking, maybe the breakdown is unnecesary, maybe not it comes into verse good tho, it works. I like the song, Thank you for requesting me to review for you, I will maybe see you again. I just came back to this site, Check me out sometime. I like the song tho, I can tell you have skills. It maybe able to have clearer production, and I think it needs another verse and a bridge. Bye. Take care too. Stay up! Peace... 100.. Mitchell

The ‘Fool Metal Carpet’ has a haunting simple chord progression and a catchy plain melody which both with the slow walking pace/pulse of the main rhythm represented by drums convey a relaxing effect to the listeners. The arrangement and instrumentation in some respects have contradictory outcomes. Individually, they sound good—though, they do not relatively sound OK in relation to the sound of the other instruments! With a more appropriate arrangement, instrumentation and lengthening the duration of the song to a standard level, this piece can shift to a potential work of music business reaching upper than a four star tune.

nice starting tune. Its a pity some of the drums don`t fit into the same deepness of the track. They are a bit superficial samples, like from ta rock presets, so would suggest to revise it. But the harmonies you created are nice and interesting. Its a good base, so could develop it still further for improvement. probably with some artwork it could work better too. keep it up, cheers

Symphonic pop with catchy beats and a lounge atmosphere at the background, sounds interesting. I would add more instruments or vocals to make the listening experience complete. It is good for a starting point but requires more in order to be workable for the radio friendly format.

a song very well elaborated, the lyric is strong and the melody is deep, I really liked the mix of sounds, I think a very good proposal and I hope to hear more of the artists in a close fence, i liked a lot. una cancion muy bien elaborada, la lirica es fuerte y la melodia es profunda, me gusto mucho la mezcla de sonidos, me parece una muy buena propuesta y espero escuchar mas de los artistas en un furturo cercano.

It's a pleasant track that sounds like it could be a short background theme on video. I think there is potential for a stronger melody, perhaps played in a different register than the dominant bass melody that is there.

ITS TRIUMPHANT, PLAYFUL, HOPEFUL, DEEP AND MOROSE ALL AT THE SAME TIME.IT ALSO IS A CLEVER NAME FOR THE TRACK.... I CAN HEAR THIS ON A SOUNDTRACK. I CAN HEAR IT BEING RAPPED ON AS WELL..IT HAS INTERNATIONAL COMFORTING SOUND TO IT...... WELL DONE!!