Outstanding Beginning and end i enjoy the concept of the whole thing it was Good Bro thank you I really enjoy it never give up keep it up Excellent Job P.S. Stay humble Stay Blessed Because You Are Blessed And Don't You Forget That In Jesus Name Amen

Hello, how are you. My name is Balla LongWay CEO, writer , Artist and performer at J side Entertainment/ Connections originally from Chapel Hill/ Durham NorthCarolina. I reviewed your music post out the list that was provided to me to choose for review. And your music was the most outstanding out of the bunch. Your music put me in the mind of a male version of the soothing sounds like Shade; hope you don't find that offensive. I'm just saying that your music has a very cool and natural flow to it, that makes people relax. You should continue to create this feel of music. It's a posive energy with a hint of mystic art craft that people will enjoy, over and over. The world needs more positive and creative music like this... I also enjoy making more positive music, just alittle rough around the edges but this is the more international level of music that I seek and like to listen to. I pray you will endure the best of luck in your music journey. Stay Up my brother BALLA LONG WAY

IVE TRULY ENJOYED THIS LAYED BACK TRACK. CANT WAIT TO DO A TRACK TO SHOW THEM THE WAY BEAUTIFUL MUSIC IS SUPPOSED TO BE. THEY DONT MAKE THEM LIKE US NO MORE FAM. KEEP PUSHING FOR GREATNESS BECAUSE ITS CLOSER THAN WE THINK. MUCH RESPECT FROM BLACK PASSION

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The intro is perfect. I love the melody and the way you caught the beat, you can feel the passion of the lyrics. The title fits perfectly. I'm wondering are you playing the guitar yourself, if so that would really put a huge spin on the song. I could see this song being performed live in front of thousands or even on a chill note at a huge bar. Keep up the great work, and I look forward to hearing more from you.

This is a well written song in terms of lyrics and melody however even as a ballad you need better production especially in terms of mixing. I think the rhythm section especially the click or hi hat is great stablelizer however find a more modern sound for those clashing cymbals seem out of place. In order to stand out you need to bring either a different arrangement to the track or different instruments to give it a new current sound or both depending on what you intend to do with the track. Too much reverb on the vocals takes away from what is a beautiful strong clear melody and often masks the lyrics we can't hear. Still a very nice track

I think you have a good voice, that with practice can be great. There is a lot of effect on your vocals, and either it is too much, or just the wrong effect for your voice. I tried to ignore the effect to hear your original voice better, and it sounds good. Also I think the beat stopped this song from being a lot better. With the voice you have, you wanna put it on a beat that's fire cause otherwise the beat really brings the entire song down. That's minor though, the most important thing is that you have a good voice, and the potential to perfect and build it into something I could visualize being a hit, or in movies or something very main stream. I know a lot of people use auto tunes to sound like T-pain, but that's not the effect I am hearing. Plus your voice sounds good enough to go dry, but definitely less effect. The effect really doesn't give your voice a chance to be heard. Like I said, I had to listen hard to hear what you really sounded like. In the end, keep working on perfecting your music, you sound good, but I know you can sound a lot better, you have the gift. Keep it up my Friend.