A lo-fi recording (which therefore means that it is quite difficult to hear the detail of the lyric and the musicianship) but overall it is a heartfelt and meaningful song, sung in a acoustic punk style and strummed on an acoustic guitar. I very much enjoyed listening to this and I would love to hear more of this artist's work, especially live or recorded with a bit more care and expertise on the tech side. I would also enjoy seeing this artist in a live concert situation.

Hello ! Great song! I love your voice, it sound true. I really apreciate it. So much peoples sings with too much flourish... The guitare and your voice are in tune and the recording quality is good. What I can say to my point of view that you can improve is to work to the opening and closing of your song. We start to listen your guitare and your voice arrive strait and it seems that you are not from the begining in the rythme. It takes some seconds. And for the end I don't think that the littles notes brings lot of things to the song. Maybe try with a different chord to open the end like a D or A major as last chord?? Congrats for the tune!

I picked this song to review because all of the initial choices have been made to let it exist as a stand alone song. The lyrics, lyrical content, chording and rhythm are all there; there’s a definite feeling conveyed to the listening audience as well. All in all the “hard choices” have been made and the song is at the point that makes or breaks the singer-songwriter which is believing it to the point where your audience believes it- “bringing it (to the audience )” as my friend Mike and I call it. My main suggestion would be to feel the groove of the rhythm in you body; settle on a direct and distinctive strum pattern that is easy for your listener to assimilate. As the strum goes on “automatic”, project the lyrics with an energy that lets listeners feel them with you. With a little finesse, this can be a great song for performance, either solo or with a band.

By hearing this, I realized that If this was recorded in one night; this artist would be a blast if She records a song in a professional studio!. A nice short song that could be improved, but a good song anyway. It is worth to hear, Excellent work.

You have a very nice singing voice and I can appreciate the singer/songwriter acoustic thing because that's what I do. I give 4/5 stars because I enjoyed it and everything flowed really well.